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SpokenBluntly 05-16-04 04:26 PM

well shamira...ur flow was off..i see where ur trying to go with this..and u had some forced punches...u kinda slacked

lyrical villian..ur flow was on points..and good punches..but u could have came harder..but i think u won the battle so u get my vote

(shamira u know u my girl but cha know how votes go)

ONE-SB

-bODy CoUnT- 05-16-04 04:52 PM

Uppin for votes...aight right on everybody but lets put this battle to rest vote homeys

General Hood 05-16-04 05:10 PM

well....dis battle wass ight but vote goes to shamira cuz hers wass longer aand had more punches den dude did even tho they were alil off ma....but yea villian ya shit wass ight too try not ta flow off wut she or any one u battle nex time diss'em ya way one...

vote:SHAMIRA

DON'T RETURN DA FAVOR....DON'T WANT ANYONE THINKIN JUS CUZ I VOTED ON DEY BATTLE TA VOTE FA ME ON MINE......B EASY!!

richard green 05-18-04 11:09 AM

to me i think that shamira punchlines were better, and her lines were much longer, then dudes one. But dude shit was ill, but i liked shamira's better.

vote: shamira

JSmoove 05-18-04 05:51 PM

ok battle. It really didn't appear that either of you wanted to win. In any case, there has to be a winner and loser.

Shamira - your structure was difficult to read. You were trying to be very aggressive and punch with all you could, but you weren't hittin' hard enuf. For that fact...neither was your oponent. You had some decent punches - I especially like that bit about Selie **I chuckled on that one** Work on structure and punch.

DaLyric - your structure was better, and your punches were direct. Your best line was prolly that Irv and babs bit.

Fundamentals is all I have to go with on this one, because both of you could have come much harder. I would have given it to Shamira if she had better structure, since I liked that Selie bit ALOT!! But, keepin' it basic, I will have to give this one to DaLyric. Sorry Sha--- keep workin' ma!!!

White Craca 05-19-04 10:30 PM

this was a close battle shamira - u had some pretty good punches and flow did pretty good too dalyricalvillian- ur lines were a bit short and had good punches too but my vote goes to shamira because she had better flow longer lines and thats it dalyricalvillian ripped her in punches though

vote Shamira

KillaCamFlow 05-20-04 01:52 AM

Well i think Shi got this 1 she got my eye a few time on her verse the rest of the battle was kinda not interesting shi had a few barz that was O.K but the rest Sloppy ,next time make and put more effort in the battle both of ya

Vote-Shi

KillaCamFlow 05-21-04 01:03 AM

Urmm....tough 1 this battle was good all around but..the winner is Shamira i think because she had 1 punch line i liked better the the rest of the lines:

Making this nigga bleed, makes me want to get a brownie and spark some trees, this bitches flow is ass rough as beyonce’s weave//

blackmon 05-23-04 09:09 PM

Man this battle was on hit but girl you was just talkin just to talk so i give it to the man


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