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accomplishment 05-17-04 06:16 PM

uppp for votes...

Metaskriptz 05-17-04 06:31 PM

I think black took this.....he came harder than Accomplishment......Nice
structure by the way.......You took this becuz of your similies and metaphores.
Work on punches more but they was tight too.......Thats all
v/blak

Return the favor please...I murked him
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124400

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White Craca 05-17-04 06:31 PM

ok blak siinz took this shit with ease accomplishemnt- ur stuff was pretty good but u didnt compare to blak siinz's verse vote= blak siinz

White Craca 05-17-04 06:31 PM

ok blak siinz took this shit with ease accomplishemnt- ur stuff was pretty good but u didnt compare to blak siinz's verse vote= blak siinz

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White Craca 05-17-04 06:31 PM

ok blak siinz took this shit with ease accomplishemnt- ur stuff was pretty good but u didnt compare to blak siinz's verse vote= blak siinz

White Craca 05-17-04 06:32 PM

o shit messed up sry yall vote on my battle with fine mind plz come on ill return the fava

HoPe 05-17-04 07:39 PM

damn accomp...you should have done alot better...well there are always times wen u do bad..fa' sho...well i give this ta black cuz he did give more punch

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MoTiF 05-18-04 11:48 PM

Crew vote should be removed besides the Feedback.

SLUT! 05-19-04 09:16 AM

it wasnt a crew vote cause i wasnt in the crew until they saw mi verse in this battle

uppin

.::N-Sight::. 05-19-04 09:55 AM

finished wit this shit, fuck it blak, take a while...
...cuz ten to one chances...
ur verse is gonna have quotes from 8 mile.../

^^ weak closer...and I'm not feeling your structure...shit looks like Poetry


Let's Get It Crackin
Jus ‘Avert-To-Lose’ I'm Sinistar Nobody Feelin Ya Once Blak ‘Murks-Crews’!
Dont Test My ‘Words-Dude’ I Smash ‘Herds-Through’! .. And Turn A "Faggit" Into A ‘Herb-Two’! ..


^^^ Just start ur verse already...damn...lol


Leave Kids ‘Folded-&-Finished’! .. Turn This Bitch Into A ‘Bold-Witness ..
Test Me? And Get Slugs To ‘Show up on our Porch’ like ‘Jehova-Witness ..

^^ pretty decent opener

Destroy Ya Face! He Can’t ‘keep-up’ Like His Pants Too ‘Hard-at-the-Waste ..
His Left Beat-Up..So He ‘Blew off Baron Davis’ To Put a ‘Guard-to-his-Face ..


Decent^^^^^^


Only "Accomplishment" you gunna achive this battle is make it 12 for you loss..
have on your knees by the end beging please like Tony Danza on who the boss..


^^^^^ decent...

ur verse wasn't all that great, but way more cnsistent with punches than ACC.

Vote: Flash

:.Faceless.: 05-19-04 10:26 AM

thank you peeps i am upping for 2 more votes so i can beat this cat again...........

C.March 05-19-04 12:14 PM

Aight imma have to go with Sinns here... Heres how i break it down..

ACCOMP - your structure wasn't too good, but it was different for a change
your punches were good
your flow was kinda hard to get at cause of the structure
Bias and Alias dont rhyme...
overall im gonna give u an 8 outta 10

SINNS - You had alright structure, i didnt like the whole - - - - - stuff...
You had good punches as well, a lil better then accomplishment..
I didn like how u rhymes witness with witness... lack of creativity...
Overall im gonna give u a 9 cause u had better structure, a little bit better punches, and a good flow...

Vote - Sinns

SLUT! 05-19-04 12:52 PM

uppin for the 5th vote again......i want this battle to be closed for good this time

if you gunna vote explain your votes.....thanks

The_Chosen_One 05-21-04 10:13 AM

black sinz has this battle clearly he has my vote
return the fava The Chosen One vs. Tonyself


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