WTF, Why All The Votes Gettin DQ'd. This Some Bullshit.

Uppin 4 Votes...

uppin fo votes

Uppin 4 Votes...

Damn, everyone's vote DQ'd for inadequated feedbackk? I'll redo mine...

open: Nae (this is a stupid thing to vote on... this should be wordplay not opener- who gives a fuckk about openers?)
close: Act (this is a stupid thing to vote on too! this shoule be for flow! who da hell thought on this shit for voting on a battle?)
personals: Act
metas: Act
punches: Act
multis: Act

win: Act

open:action
close:action
metas:LilNae
multis:action
flow:LilNae
personals:action

winner:action

Yo this Battle's A Week Old Already, Can yall Vote Up...

uppin on votes stop lookin at dis shit and vote

Uppin 4 Votes...

I'll leave you laying down, shaking like an epelectick/
seize ya like a detective apprehending the unsuspected//nice multie
you talkin' too much shit, something I should've expected/
the only way you hittin' like a tank is if that tank's a septick//ok...
I'm the cure for the infected/
cleaning out the bacterium crumbs like an antiseptic//
you picked up a pen, shoulda left it un-affected/nice flow
you a pathetic skeptic investing your time on a weak rhyme ready to be rejected//nice
I'll burn you like I was acidic/
to be more specific, I'm quantized educated quantum physicks//no.....
Everytime you rock a mic, gotta check the shit for lipstick/
around a 12 inch dick or galvanized pipe is where your lips fit//aiight
You don't get fucked in the butt, you just get fisted/
the fact you eat crap outta azzcrack is the only reason why you "spit shit"//played
The H-2-O pro, I flow like likwit/
the only time you'll flow right is when you get your wrist slit//nice
Here's a lending lyric, take it, I insist it/
if having half a brain were a train, your azz just missed it//ok...
This is but an ounce of knowledge, you still can't lift it/
like when you saw pussy for the first time, you just can't find the right tool to stick it...ok...played but nice flow


action

Listen Bitch,
You Aint Even Close To Nice So I'ma Eat-Ya-In-This-Battle... ~1
This Ho Finished Cuz I'm Hungry Like Latifah-In-White-Castle... ~2 ya nice...
Guess I Gotta Rip-A-Fake, Cuz When I Flow I Kill And Oblit-er-ate... ~3
And The Only "HARD TIMES" Nae Faces Is When She Got A Dick-To-Taste... ~4 nice...
Heffer Only Got "PHAT RHYMES" Wit Verses On Her Hips-And-Waste... ~5
Lyrically This Chick-Is-Raped.. Fuck A Lil Nae Cuz A Bitch-I-Hate... ~6 nice multie...
Homegirl Only "FLOW SICK" When She On The Rag Wit A Yeast-Infection... ~7
And You Couldn't Hide From My Divine Rhymes Wit Police-Protection... ~8 nice....
Chillin On That PS2 Game The Only Time This Flusie Be-In-The-Streets... ~9
Guzzlin Seamen-For-Weeks She Just Mad Cuz My Whole Team-Got-the-Cheeks...~10 nice...

this was hard to vote cause both were good, but both didnt have punches that hit really hard. But i think i GOTTA GIVE it to ACTION cause his lines were down to the point, no fillers, multies were incorporated in the punches which made it flow nice...lil nae shouldnt use fillers cause it fucks up the flow.....but overall nice battle this goes to action peace.

ight this battle goes to action even despit shorty goin ova tha limit..

multies, and complexity go to lil nae for lines like...

I'll leave you laying down, shaking like an epelectick/
seize ya like a detective apprehending the unsuspected//
you talkin' too much shit, something I should've expected/
the only way you hittin' like a tank is if that tank's a septick//

but the flow, punches, personals, got to action for lines like...

Guess I Gotta Rip-A-Fake, Cuz When I Flow I Kill And Oblit-er-ate... ~3
And The Only "HARD TIMES" Nae Faces Is When She Got A Dick-To-Taste... ~4
Heffer Only Got "PHAT RHYMES" Wit Verses On Her Hips-And-Waste... ~5
Lyrically This Chick-Is-Raped.. Fuck A Lil Nae Cuz A Bitch-I-Hate...


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