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SPuLâ„¢ 05-23-04 12:31 AM

yea, he won this. I don't mean to make excuses, but the verse I made to use against him got deleted from Microsoft Word, and then on thursday I was wayy too pissed off, Kings losin' by 3 in Game 7, to spit. So I spat sme weak ass spit. But give this one to Pimp Rawb. Tight spit by him too. props to you, man.

DirtBoy69 05-23-04 05:35 PM

breakdown for spul:

flow:choppy in spots some of the lines got abit big 5/10

volcab:mah average nothing to say 5/10

punches:you addressed your oppenent everyline but it was all pretty weak the punches fav line,"Cuz your dumbass rhymes are as tight, as Paris Hilton's pussy/" aside from that nothing too great 6/10

overall:16/30 hoped to see better from you

breakdown for pimp rawb:

flow:alright 6/10

volcab:average nothing to say 5/10

punches:best line,"And Like Siamese Twins In A Car Crash thiz Your 4th-Defeet/DAMN!" everything else was pretty average 6/10


overall:17/30

vote--pimp rawb

DirtBoy69 05-23-04 08:31 PM

2-0 pimp rawb wins


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