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Your crew don’t mean shit, even a mouse rolls with a click
Cheney must be Ptolemaic, coz your world revolves around Dick\ ^^6 funny...clever Dissolving your spit, split you in half and leave you to die-section Going down for attempted Murder, so you best revise Methods ^^ slick wordplay...punch not that hard You couldn’t cum with hot shit if your intestines attached to your balls Getting slapped till u fall, now you’re back’s at the wall ^^ blah Gradually graduated, smoke you to leave you like your avatar Battling wack newbies in Front Lines shows how hard you are I’ll carve you up, but I won’t take the pussy way out like a C-Section Relieve stresses, like a Chinese family of four, you need les-sons ^^^^ pretty weak...not a good punch...closer is just eh Soft pussy cat . . Fuck nine lives I`ll beat you down with one Dont deserve to view my lines & where the FUCK have you came from? ^^ decent opener Put you in plasters bitch , I’ve mastered this & fuck`d up you’re game. Embarrass you so much , next week you`ll sign in with a different name. ^^ not hard...but decent I taught you structure but you suck , so I know you fairly well. You might have got better . . but beating me?! – is a fairy tell . . Reconginze , I wont let ya rise . . get good or let ya progress. Fuck shouting & slang , I`ll murder this fake & wont settle for less. __________________ ^^ decent closer Breakdown Rhymes Mack Flow Tie Punch Mack Vote: Mack |
1-1 ^ No comment on that vote.
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breakdown for macka:
flow:alright nothing too complex but it worked 6/10 volcab:pretty solid use not overly basic at all 6/10 punches:some alright lines for the most part played ideas best line includes some played ideas but still,"You couldn’t cum with hot shit if your intestines attached to your balls" overall not too bad 6/10 overall:18/30 breakdown for m section: flow:worked pretty good same problems as your oppenent nothing to make it special 6/10 volcab:i don't think it was quite at your oppenent's level here slightly less 5.5/10 punches:nothing too direct best line,"Fuck . . you`re used to hoping on herbs , like Australian kangaroo’s " kinda weak here try harder next week 5.5/10 overall:17/30 vote--macka gets my vote |
Embarrass you so much , next week you`ll sign in with a different name.
man i aint votin on this m will say its a hate vote... but that line comin from the guy who changes his name weekly |
Get the fuck out of here idiot , damn even the league runner is a herb.
The point of signing in with another name is making an account . . Not nick changing you fool. now shut up. |
wot? is he a herb just coz he voted for me?
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yo im a vote macka, that shit woz hot man i woz feeling that. i ddnt really like m section coz of his punches against australia,not coz i come from australia ma self but dissing tha stereotypical aussie as a punch is quite wack unless you make it unique and that woznt. macka came down hard, nice punches and worldplay, not much to say bad bout it really.
vote = macca hmm hmm i juz edited this post coz i realised there is no poll :huh: |
Soft pussy cat . . Fuck nine lives I`ll beat you down with one
Dont deserve to view my lines & where the FUCK have you came from? 7/10 hot Put you in plasters bitch , I’ve mastered this & fuck`d up you’re game. Embarrass you so much , next week you`ll sign in with a different name. haha 7/10 Reading scriptures of dopeness kid , is something I hope ya like . . I`ll merk you so bad in battles , you`ll take your wackness to open mic. 6.5/10 Don’t deny anything kid , you`ve failed – man I knew . . Fuck . . you`re used to hoping on herbs , like Australian kangaroo’s 8/10 Busting slug`s in you`re pieces & have you squashed like a rodent. You stank so much & people knew , they decided to make deodorant 8.5/10 lol I taught you structure but you suck , so I know you fairly well. You might have got better . . but beating me?! – is a fairy tell . . 6/10 Reconginze , I wont let ya rise . . get good or let ya progress. Fuck shouting & slang , I`ll murder this fake & wont settle for less. 7/10 nice drop Your crew don’t mean shit, even a mouse rolls with a click Cheney must be Ptolemaic, coz your world revolves around Dick 8/10 hot Dissolving your spit, split you in half and leave you to die-section Going down for attempted Murder, so you best revise Methods hmm 6/10 Australian, but I’m reversing geography, because you’re beneath me That’s why you modified your name, coz I’m over-C’s G (overseas) lol 6.5/10 You couldn’t cum with hot shit if your intestines attached to your balls Getting slapped till u fall, now you’re back’s at the wall played 5/10 You’re lines are so lame it’s like they’ve had all limbs amputated I’m glad you hate it, your flow aint smooth, it’s granulated huh lol 5/10 Gradually graduated, smoke you to leave you like your avatar Battling wack newbies in Front Lines shows how hard you are 6/10 I’ll carve you up, but I won’t take the pussy way out like a C-Section Relieve stresses, like a Chinese family of four, you need les-sons 6.5/10 v/-m section, for a good consistant drop hit up the championship mtach yo |
yea. just for the line u said "huh" to, lame means being unable to walk or somethinhg. Like, if you say a dog is lame, it means it can't walk properly. Also, gnanulated means having grains in it, ie. not smooth. lol. respect ur vote though man.
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Sorry ^ But Herb`s are voting for you & vets for me , incase you havent noticed
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IS this guy even in the fucking league it`s 2-2. |
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3-2 . . I win.
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3-1 . .
N sight aint in this league either . . |
the fuck man? get the fuck outta here. votes from people outside the league count this week. check it right here.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124719 last post on first page. and Native's vote? LMAO!!! dickriding to the extreme. So ACTUALLY, I win, 3-2 to me. eat a dick. And even if Native's counted, I still had 3 before u did, so I win anyway. Go and bitch. |
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