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Girl ya 15, it's past ya bedtime and u aint finished ya homework
Ill keep u awake, give u lines so pure they make ya dome hurt

nice opener, flowed well and the punchline was decent.
U got a nigga lubin u up for so cheap u like a jetta pit stop
Saw u whistlin at the corner sayin "Pay whatever ya niggas got"
egh- I dont really feel it but it might just be me so I aint gonna say anything bad
And we know u wont get caught, cuz even bitch cops
Dont give a fuck about a ho whose cherry'll never get popped
ahh... and yes the wordplay catches up- decent couple bars
U ugly bitch, I saw ya pics, u aint even close to funny
And when i put my spliff out on ya lips u still aint spoken bluntly
probly the nicest punchline yet...i likes
Comin at me, simple minded like a moth next to the light
Heatin up a battle's easy as jiffy pop, why u cant get the recipe right?
yeah I really liked this bar as well... good punchline
And u try to diss, but youll only burn me if u gave me VD
But then id be doing a sentence for statutory five to fifteen
Not Amazing
U the artist formerly known as "Kid go paint by numbers", im Sistene on wax
I remember some dude said u was tight I said "Which wet dream was that?
decent closer...not bad i like the set up more than the punchline but still good.

EDUCATIONAL TYPE SHIT you can't match~my~wit you dealing wit a savage bitch/
Have ya heat *vanishin'* and close this *match* with lighter fluid packages/
Nice opener
You think you gutta cuz someone slipped u a *be a nicca for a day pass*/
Be honest the only way your shit would be flowing is if i passed u an exlax/
exlax is played, not a bad bar though
My only homework was to check da weather to see if u could deal wit my trenches/
Then i had to review ya Anatamy but couldn't measure ya scrotum with 3 pinches/
umm.. no yeah.. just no-- if you had worded that differently it coulda been killer
*Kill* you in a minute leave ya voice as *bloody* as static in ya attic/
*I WOULD GIVE YOU A HIT* but your dick is to0 limp to be *retracted*/
Um no again, this wasn't right at all-
You know alot about Menstrals CUZ YOU A *BLOODY PUSSY* on leak/
*I GLIDE IN EASY* *BLUNTLY'S here to *soak up ya rhyming streak/ (like a tampon)
nice punchline here i likes
BLAC SINS AND DIVINCI-how the fuck you got multiple lovers dogg be serious/
Rewind ya rhymes re-check ya suspenders gay lovers leave ya balls
*RE-DICK-U-LESS*~LEAVE YOU MORE BLOODY THEN A FAT GIRLS PERIOD/
Structure fucks up here, but its not too bad
NICCA UR STYLE AND NOT TO MENTION EVEN YOUR NAME IS VERY COMICAL/
IM PHENOMANAL~I PUSH LYRICS LIKE *NYPD* PUSH BULLETS THROUGH ABDOMANLS*/
nice punch line, nice setup good wordplay
YOU HAVE NO CHOICE BUT TO LOOSE *SIMPLE IT'S NO COMPRIMISE*/
OFFICIALLY HERE TO*GUIDE YOUR DEMISE* CUZ YOUR DICK SIZE LIES *IT'S ALWAYS ON A CONSTANT STATE OF "CIRCUMSIZED"/- um- no weak closer.....
I'd have to give this battle to Killuminatic... By no means do I think SpokenBluntly was wack, but I dissected the two verses to see what I liked better...Killuminatic punches hit harder, Killuminatic missed alot fewer punches as well, and I think ur structure held up better through out the whole verse... V- Killuminatic- Please return the favor.... http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...068#post1295068

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yo if u not voteing don't post feedback ppl AND JUST VOTE ON IT...AND CAN SOME MOD PLEASE CLEAN THIS UP *ONE*

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ok first off......imma say it like this.......this,was the best line in the whole battle

"And when i put my spliff out on ya lips u still aint spoken bluntly"
IT WAS PERSONAL,AND A GOOD PUNCH TOO..N KILLED HER WHOLE EFFORT ALTOGETHER.....KILLUMINATIC......UR VERSE,WAS WEAK THROUGHOUT,BUT THAT ONE LINE BEAT HERS.........I AINT REALLY GONNA BREAK URS DOWN.....IT WAS JUST KINDA BASIC.......BUT SPOKEN BLUNTLY......ALL THE SHIT U TALK ,N THIS IS WHAT U SPIT???? HAHA,I JUST HAVE TO BRAKE DOWN UR VERSE TO SHOW U WHAT I'M TLAKIN ABOUT


Have ya heat *vanishin'* and close this *match* with lighter fluid packages/

ALLLLLLLLLL LINES ABOUT MATCHES ARE PLAYED AS FUCK


Be honest the only way your shit would be flowing is if i passed u an exlax/
COME THE FUCK ON.....THATS THE OLDEST MOST PLAYED SHIT EVER.......THEY SPIT THOSE EXLAX LINES YRS BACK......


*Kill* you in a minute leave ya voice as *bloody* as static in ya attic/

JUST CUZ U SAY "KILL" AND "BLOODY" IN THE SAME SENTENCE DOENST MAKE IT WORDPLAY HAHAH.......OH MY GOODNESS

*I WOULD GIVE YOU A HIT* but your dick is to0 limp to be *retracted*/
GAY

You know alot about Menstrals CUZ YOU A *BLOODY PUSSY* on leak/
FUCKIN WACK

*I GLIDE IN EASY* *BLUNTLY'S here to *soak up ya rhyming streak/ (like a tampon)
TAMPON LINES? C'MON...U SUCK

Rewind ya rhymes re-check ya suspenders gay lovers leave ya balls *RE-DICK-U-LESS*~LEAVE YOU MORE BLOODY THEN A FAT GIRLS PERIOD/
ANOTHER PERIOD LINE?????


UR WHOLE ENTIRE VERSE WAS WACK......~,",*,CAPITALS..THEY DONT HYPE UP A GARBAGE VERSE.......EVERYTHING U SPIT WAS ABOUT PERIODS AND DICKS........N UR PUNCHES,WERE ALL PLAYED OR JUST WACK...........U CLAIM U MAKIN A LIVIN OUT OF THIS? U GOTS TO BE JOKIN........NO WONDER U CANT AFFORD A $39.99 HEADSET......THIS WITHOUT A DOUBT IS FOR KILLUMINATIC........UR VERSE WAS HORRIBLE TO READ...HIS VERSE WAS NOTHIN SPECIAL.BUT HE HAD ONE GOOD PUNCH THAT MADE IT WORTH READING........

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yo killu- ur shit was off the chain, punch after punch, they was hot too. this killed it though
U ugly bitch, I saw ya pics, u aint even close to funny
And when i put my spliff out on ya lips u still aint spoken bluntly

yo spoken bluntly ur shit was aight, it wasn't consistant though, u picked up a lil at the end but damn, how u gonna spit after a verse like the other guys.

spoken..isnt SHAMIRA ur friend in person? haha,cuz i seen her mention that in another thread....thats pretty weak of u to try to get her to vote on ur shit.........lol

i told her NOT to vote on my battles BITCH cuz of herbs like yaself AND IF YOU WAS A REAL "EMCEE" AND BETTER THEN "ANY OTHER FEMALE RAPPER SIGNED" YOU WOULDN'T HAVE MAD PPL ON UR PUSSY ASS BLACKLIST...that's pussy bitch..EVERY TIME YA ASS VOTE...you put da ppl date hate and that don't think ur shit on ur black list yo...you ain't shit bitch..lol that's why u usualy spit 2nd CUZ UR ASS FEEDS OF UR CHALLENGES VERSE...you ain't shit lmoa ur ass is comical...just like ya face..I ain't DP bitch I won't suck up to u and suck ur clit for shit *NOW RIDDLE ME THAT* lol


SpokenBluntly

Aiight Well To Tell You The Truth Yall Missing The Concept Of This Battling shyt cuz its not only bout punches its bouit wordplay, multis, metas, flow, punches also, content of the verse, consistancy, Latin you seemed to be concerned with only punches and your flow in your verses seems to fall off alot, and that line was not even that ill it was aiight, and isnt killmatic your friend?? i seen him takin up for you in another thread, No IOne tell shamira to do nothing and they dont know each other in person....obviously whoever voted on spoken understands the concept behind this rappin shyt

Let Me Break This down even though i cant vote
Killumatic your verse was weak it lacked punches flow was aiight, punches were lacking and your wrdplay was off.....your thoughts was all over the place in your verse so try structuring it better.

SpokenBluntly some of your punches were played, you had a good flow, you verse was put together straight but you lacked multies and metas hard hitting ones at that, you realized what you were up against and you posted to fit the style you felt you had to beat him with but sometimes you have to take different approaches or the readers will get bored and not want to read it.

if i had to vote i would vote spokenbluntly i know her(not personally) but because her verse was overall better and im not judging her winning over one weak line.....im tired of this bullshyt foreal cuz all yall females is STUPID and im talkin to which ever female cjoices to read and take it to heart cyuz yall seem to want to hate on everyone when your not that ill yourself cuz niccaz online tell you your nyce cuz you could pre~write a lil verse that yall give a deadline to be three days...yall need to fall back and show respect to femcees that deserve it CUZ THIS IS THE ONLY SITE I BEEN ON WHERE THE FEMALES ACTUALLY DESERVE RESPECT BUT YALL WANT TO HATE SO YALL JUST LOOK STUPID JUST FALL BACK ALL YALL TRIFFLLING FEMALES AND DO WHAT YOU DO

spokenblunty......i can battle U and i'll spit first n i guarantee i'll KO u.....u fuckin suck

LaTiNKiTTeN, u have no right to say that i voted for spoken, because she was my freind, we come from the same site...and...that doesn't matter. The vote didn't count, so u better be happy.Spoken killed killuminatic in this battle, i have to agree 100% with lady lyrical, most of u focus on only the punchlines. Also LaTiNKiTTeN, why u hating on spoken, if u so nice then drop ya verse in finish lines now. Spoken keep fucking up bitches!!!!!

Yo who gives a fuck about some internet beef? Yall are fuckin retarded talkin about who should have voted and who should battle who. Just battle and if yall were confident in your skill u wouldnt care who spits first. Everyone goes second sometimes.
Quit usin this battle for ya personal beefs.

the only way i will battle u kitten is if you CLEAR YOUR BLACK LIST LMAO...which you won't so fuck ya scary ass...YOU NOT ABOUT TO USE MY BLACK ASS LMAO..so clear it then we can battle *uppin*


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