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Ight..I'm a boy..so get that straight HeLLonEarth
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I got a passion for rappin'
When you feel passionate you leave residue in knapkins A gun is the only thing you've ever put a cap in Sorry bout the late post, u were serious? Oh...cuz I was laughin' when you was askin' Damn ya get slammed like Spam into E-mail trash bin ...........uhhh mind if I cut in, I'm rude like that and sometimes just but in.......sometimes I just can't keep my rymes from bustin'....Like the seem on the spandex holdin' Oprah's gut in....ha ha ha ha ha....Sorry ya'll sometimes I get flows goin through my head so I go with it....now to the voting......... drum roll please break down Fav. Line Lyrical Method Its Over Dawg, I Ain't Havo Dawg, You Take Harder Wippins Than Christ When He Got Flogged/ K trini came off with a better flow and a higher elevation Lyrical Method wrote in sort of a hard to understand style...Not like complicated words but like the way it was worded/arranged on the page/it was a little difficult to read with a steady flow like every verse deserves to be read with....So in all fairness that sort of put you at a disadvantage....Also the line that said something to the effect of you a "contipated" toilet always shittin I think you meant constipated, and by definition constipation is sort of like the opposite of diahrea, it's more like never shittin', or more literally can't shit....and K trini also had some contradicting word play in her verse... Well hers wasn't exactly contradicting just could've been worded better...The sherlock line...Sherlock was known for putting together clues and solving crimes through phorensic tactics....not exploring...However his observational skills would come in handy...someone more like Columbus or Lewis and Clark...or magellan or someone who was known solely or atleast mainly for exploring.... overall vote I give to K trini 2 both contenders: Keep'em droppin' |
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Yo relax dawg... I know Ketch always votes honestly and he knows what he's talking about most of da time, although he does come accross a lil harsh at times. Checkk his battles, u can see he aint a beginner. Aiight my vote is goin to Ktrini... Here's why... Method had a few punches dat didn't make any sense... like... (Don't take any of this personal dawg, use it as GOOD feedbackk to come harder next time!) You Talk Like A Contipated Toilet, Always Shittin (Constipated Toilet? Don't Constipated mean you CAN'T shit? And how do toilets shit?) Its Over Bitch, Go Home And Fix Your Skill Cuz In Rb Relaunched Are The Niggas That Kill-ending (This finisher didn't rhyme wid anything in da verse) Im Fruity Like Dole? The Only Way You Could Effect My Rhymes Is If I Was Alergic To Fags Who Love Poll. (You kinda baggin on yourself in this one by sayin if you was allergic to fags who love poll... Shit, I HOPE you already are allergic to em! lOl) KTrini's verse wasn't all dat either, but his punches made sense at least, and I don't really see anythang in Method's verse dat stood out at all. Get more COMPLEX and creative wid your punches. Try some wordplay. But, nevertheless, good job to both MCs and congrats to whoever wins! VOTE=KTRINI |
K-Trini...straight up sorry and shit didn't read that part about you bein' a boy...my bad but never the less you did take my vote
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obviously you a newbe. erase that fuckin vote. i don't vare if you vote against me but postin so bullshit it not exceptable. if you want to vote against me make sure you explain it bitch.
lol^^ it was no hate dog but ya punches were played and i posted an example & that was enough i thought..u know u lost..everyone else felt the same so i wasn't comin out of left field..get over it or fukkin battle me an i'll beat u the same..1 |
Vote-k trini
Much more solid verse..tho both were ok felt she had better wordplay and vocab all round so she or her whoever k trini is gets the vote |
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