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KillaCamFlow 05-18-04 02:55 PM

I think Nelly won this 1 i think he just hit harder punches and luscious wasjust trying to rhyme the word constantly try next time to hit harder

"vote"Nelly

KillaCamFlow 05-18-04 03:08 PM

I would like to see a rematch bewtween these 2 people i think they could do better if they had a little more time

kEtCh~22 05-18-04 03:14 PM

Nigga I Got Half A Mind To Dis-pocket My Nine And Pop This Imposter//
Don't Act Like Left's The Shocker Jus Cuz I Wrote Freestyle Rhyme That Checked His Shit Like A Prostate Doctor//

kina played idea but it was the best line in the battle..^^..

it was even close ta me nelly's shit was REAL Basic..i think he couldn't even compete in multi's..word play nothin..respect..

Metaskriptz 05-18-04 04:07 PM

Nelly-You did have better punches.Structure was better too
you take this becuz of similies and metaphore.Balance
was not that aight

Lucious-Work on structure.Punches came weak a lil
Work on similies and more aight.....Thats all I have to say

v/Nelly

Return the favor http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124905

Restricted 05-18-04 04:26 PM

Check Dis..

Nelly: 5/10
Your Structure Wasn't That Nice, But Your Punches Were Alright and Yours Was More Direct Towards Him. Work On Metaphors, Word Usuage, and Hotter Punches..

Luscious: 4.5/10
Aiyo Your Word Ususage Was Alright, Sum Punches Didn't Make Sense. Your Battle Verse Coulda Been Used Against Anyone. Only Bar That Could've Been Mistaken As Used Against Nelly Was The Last Bar....Just Work On Personals, Punches, and Metaphors.
Yours Was More Like Open Mic...

Vote - Nelly

~R~

PoLiFicK 05-18-04 04:39 PM

imma lean on dis 2 nelly he a way better flow and his punches actuall connected foot took the vocab but not a consitant drop on his part

nelly

bestline-u wacker then walking around the mall`.... wit no money
laugh at my rhymes but soon it wont be funny~
cuz ill leave ya dome lookin like a crash test dummy,,,


nice

worsteline-none

overall verse gets a 8/10

foot

nice drop but no need 4 break down verse got a 6/10

winner-nelly


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