this was a weak as fuck battle

both verse sucked...........PRO
your verse lacked the punches and was really weak........your need to work on your structure and re-wording your punches so that they hit harder.......you had a couple good lines but some of the concepts was played.....keep elevating

accomplishment-
what the fuck was you thinking.......your shit is like only 5 lines cause you just reaching for lines with that structure......your shit was weak and your punches didnt really stick.......work on your structure because that threw off your flow and made it hard to understand.....even if you had this battle one i would have looked down on your verse alot becaues of that structure

v/pro

yo dont forget to return the favor in my sig the battle v. me and snapshit

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Flow - Pro
Punches - Pro
Personals - Acc
Vocab - Pro
Vote - Pro

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pro rican gets my vote becuase his flow was better, he rhymed more and he had more personels in his rhyming and his closure helped him to put it all away in this battle and hey check this battle out plz thanx.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127734

I stand tall…. and I walk thru you ground like tribal/
I aint liable for yo death cause to me yo life aint vital/
I got ryme ammunitaion that can pack missle silos /
my flow shoots fire like volcanoes/


^^ 1st two lines are devastating...pretty nice there..hard hitting


I got words that can make ya flip/
My shit is oscar nominated like steven spielberg scripts/
The only way this nigga can ever manage to spit/
Is when he turns fagit and he suck those dicks…//

^^ decent...rather boastful...but still good punches


23/30

My fingers gripped on, a.k. triggers...
don't like p.r.'s cuz because i'm Pro-Wigger.../
my flow in unbreakable to this kids weekness...
...rican more PRO-gay marrige...
just because he eats dicks.../

^^ way too simple...where are the punches?

cuz only two things cry, babies and peurtoricans.../
i'm accomplished, still unable to tell what its like without fans...
becasue didnt even call me out, and still get bitchslapped with both hands.../


^^ work on structure


20/30

Vote: Pro..better verse.PERIOD

PS...RTF please...I can ask for honest votes in BATTLES can't I?

gay ass shit

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127547

Pro-Rican i like your verse alot.accomplishment i liked yours too but your lyrics through my train of thought off. i couldn't connect your shit together ,so i didn't get most of yah shit.

Pro-Rican's best lines: "chaotic when i spit on these ones and twos/
astronimical is the level difference between me and you/ /
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO"
overall performance 7/10

accomplishment's best lines: "i'm accomplished, still unable to tell what its like without fans...
becasue didnt even call me out, and still get bitchslapped with both hands.../"

as you can see both had nice punch lines^^^^. but Pro-Rican had consistency throughout his whole verse. better structure and lyrics. accomplishment structure was not great and he didn't spit hard all the way through his verse. consistency is the key.

vote=Pro-Rican

RTF\/ in my sig vs Killah Bwoy