i c, thanks for tha feedbak ya'll....uppin fo more votes [3]

uppin fo votes fa real..Dang im suprised i got a vote but imma stay confident but lolz i spit ma verse in 5 minutes dat shit was maad short....If i took ma time i coulda had sum hot shit son DAMN!!! i shoulda took ma time UPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPIN!!

uppin for mo votes come one peeps [4]

yo i thought fresh won this

Punches: fresh
MEtis:fresh
flow:tie
the battle was tyt but i gotta go wid fresh. his lines seemed more complex and punched harder. But good spit magician

I read both verses and ima say Fresh, ur lines were kinda basic and the punches were slightly played also try not to explain all ur lines as it takes away sum of the imagination but all in all good verse.

Magician: Blah werent feelin it at all u hardly hit a punch, self glory verses (Which i hate) were used too much jus a bad day 4 u basically.

V/Fresh

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basically fresh took this......
the ova cat woz short in every area...sed it tuk 5 mins...thats wot it luked like so think b4 u spit

fresh-gud structure n flow...up ya personals...keep goin..gud spit

vote-fresh

don't explain your punchlines at all...it's not like somebodies gonna read the explanation and be like ohhhh thats sick now that i understand...there just gonna think you were stretchin it...and if you have to explain your punches..then you WERE stretchin it

fresh got this for sure. yeah, tere were some played lines, but there were also some nice personals. Magician really didn't cme with any decent punches and shit, so fresh gets my vote.