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It's all gud
looks like ure imagery is beating my storytelling Re$TricTed oh well keep these votes comin!! |
good topical battle...king u had a decent drop you stayed on topic well good imagery and wordplay...OK structure very good flow...easy but good read...it started off sorta weak but then gained momentum and became a good piece the closer to this topical was very good...at first i thought you would let him fry and lets be seious king if u commited murder and they caught someone else would you turn yourself in....U CANT DO IT king RB will miss you :P good topical
overall: 7/10 restricted you had a good drop too...once again very good vocab and wordplay structure was straight...good flow...good piece from you...and this line was hott... Till The Other Day When I Ate The Bible and Drank Holy Water.. Killed The Priest Cause My Mom Gave Him Head and I Caught Her.. very good imagery in that bar hott drop from you had perfect flow overall: 8/10 vote: re$tricted i had to re-read both verses but i think re$tricted took this one with the vivid imagery and good vocab ~!1!~ |
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