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Aiight I felt it like this.
20 grand dropped some kill apunches but he had some filla. The punches landed, and rthe flow and structure were good. Discharge had punches aimed at 20 greand whole crew, and he had flow and structure on lockdown. Aiight- 20 grand-8/10 Discharge-9/10 Good battle no elevation needed Return da favor (in ma sig) |
vote= discharge
he had a nicer rhyme scheme he had more advanced punches . I liked the way he presented his a lil more nice battle though. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125740 can yall return da fava |
Well i thought this was pretty weak, not your best for sure...
Im voting for Discharge here, because i thought his was overall better, Heres the break down 20 - you flowed alright, but your opener... I aint gonna lie, I bet ur drop will be hot// but ur time is now up like an expired shot clock// Doesn't Rhyme. I didn't see any good punches at all, this needs to be elevated. DISCHARGE - You had good flow, good structure, you had some good punches. Your best line - say your crew cant be stoped ive beat evry 1 in ur crew.. u want honest truth? that crew is bout as-wack-as-you... That was pretty good.... OVERALL - Alright, I thought it was weak from both of you, You both didn't follow the rules, 10 bars, not 10 lines. Discharge u took like 20 mins to spit that.... in a 10 - 15 min time limit, but that doesnt really matter. Discharge came better with punches, and thats what wins these battles.. Vote - Discharge |
20 GraND: yo aight ima be honest your verse was kinda lacking
everything was just half of decent nothing special at all.....so I got nuthin else to say bout chu..... discharge: well everything from you was mostly on point flow, vocab, structure creativity & I a couple of your punches my personal favourite has to be: "chewing up his weak rhymes cuz they sweet and edible.... to tell you the truth if wack was good 20'd be incredible...." my vote goes to: discharge if u could do a honest vote on my battles i'll appreciate it thx: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125133 |
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