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dawg you should never fuckin talk, you should be like mr. bean.
Cuz yo game so fuckin stale, you need some listerene
And yo game is like pebbles, while im rollin them boulders
And yo shit is flakin so bad, you need some Head and Shoulders.
And I am standin up here packin all my punches and kicks.
but I see you at the park, packin lunches and dicks.
Dawg I think you need a tip, cuz I got all the fuckin trix.
you should start a fuckin battle at the Special Olympics.
And you still wouldn’t win, cuz you just no good at rappin.
And I bet a guy could even beat ya speakin Pig Latin!

First of all^^^that is simple..straight up..i can't even believe this battle is 4-4..thats newb shit..no metas..no complexity in rhyme scheme..punches not creative...not close..1

He Only Cum Hard When He Grabs Cock, Sorry But I Don't Care If Ya Whole Family Offended.. 5
Hit U Wit MASS Shots And Best Believe I Aint Talkin Bout The School Camby Attended.. 6
if u know ya NCAA ball that is sick & CREATIVE!

VOTE ACTION

yo uppin fo votes ya'll, help me put this one away

ight i agree with the man above me

Jacket's Verse was very simple to me too simple......he had one tight line which was that fractions line but thats it...

Action's verse had wordplay, creativity and better punches

vote = action

first off let me say PIMP RAWB is a HOMO for being a no show at our battle

Damn this is pretty close...I still don't know whom I'm gonna vote for... but we'll find out when I break it down...

Both yall verses really consisted of 3-4 bars

Action

Quote:

"This Kid Admits He Never Gets Ass All He Do Is Look At Internet Pics When he Jack-et.. 1
And Like Afleck Lickin Dessert Topping Off J-Lo's Backside You Gettin Ya Ass Whipped.. 2
Tryin To Talk Bout Guns But a Frog Under Ya Burger The Only Time You Seen A Mac Jump.. 3
Let's Be Real Even If This Mark Had A HI-C In His Suitcase He Still Couldn't Pack Punch.. 4
Ya Know The Kid Action Got More Venom In His Veins Then The Crocodile Hunter.. 11
This Man's Been Slain And I Take Picture's Of My Victim's So Stop And Smile Sucker.. 12"

Jacket

Quote:

"Yo In this battle boy, im the one gettin Action
Cuz you so damn bad you get votes in fractions.
Im gonna plaster my rhymes up on all over yo head.
So every time think of a winnin, you’ll think of me instead
Dawg I think you need a tip, cuz I got all the fuckin trix.
you should start a fuckin battle at the Special Olympics.
And you still wouldn’t win, cuz you just no good at rappin.
And I bet a guy could even beat ya speakin Pig Latin!"

the rest of it was just blah...and filler lines

I think both of your decent personals evenly match up

Personals:Tied
Structure: Jacket (I hate when people number their lines)
Flows:Jacket
Complexity:Action, for the few lines that were good
Punches:Jacket

v/ Jacket even though I expected more from Action

jacket came a little better in this battle so my vote goes to jacket
VOTE jacket