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Reword ya ‘Verbage-Bitch’, U only like holdin’ mics coz it reminds u of ‘JERKIN-DICKKS’//
I’ll rip out ya EYES to EAT EM & Rip Out Ma GUTS coz ya “iN”-“SIGHT” aint WORTH-A-“SHIT”!!// Serious use of wordplay to construct a nice opening bar and punchline... Your verse was definately correct... You came harder than I usually see in battles so Ima have to give you an 8 outta 10... Good wordplay- decent structure and some funny punches.. I’l squash this Gay Prickk, & makin’ “SENSE” of sellin Brain is ‘Barely-An-OCCUPATION’// (cents) ‘Stop-Playin’, Ya Asshole’s “Filled With More MATES” than ‘AUSTRALIAN-CONVERSATIONS’!!!// KO!- My fav bar.....from you. and then there awas nsight-- WTF!?! kid I'll rip you like 'junk mail'..toss you 'a 'side' like with a chicken dinner..- Get 'off my dick' cuz I don't need to 'stress my point'..you will NOT be the winner..- this was ur first really nice punch in the verse... You had a good flow in this and it made your punches almost an afterthought... I really enjoyed your verse and the ending bar was a good closer... This was a close battle-- real hard to choose a winner here but Ima have to go with... N-Sight... He had more personal punchlines... and I really just felt the flow-- I thought Tay-G was gonna win until half way through your verse when it just became apparent that you wasn't having it... Good battle- Vote Nsight. |
Damn Good Ass Battle...
Flow - Tie, Both yall verses flowed real real nice. Good use of multi's and the rhyme scheme was tight from both yall. Punches - Tay, not even close. Damn near every line in Tay's verse was a ill ass punch: I’l squash this Gay Prickk, & makin’ “SENSE” of sellin Brain is ‘Barely-An-OCCUPATION’// (cents) ‘Stop-Playin’, Ya Asshole’s “Filled With More MATES” than ‘AUSTRALIAN-CONVERSATIONS’!!!// KO! Personals - Tie, Again both yall came hard. Both emcees was hittin hard wit the personals, I saw it about even. Creativity - Tay, he had some unbelievably original punches. Sight's shit was creative too, but Tay got him: Tay ‘Spray-Rhymes’ & I’ll cut off ya LEFT arm so u can Spell Ya ‘Name-“RIGHT”’!// No Games I ‘Take-Shine’ & he couldn’t SEE a “slice of the PIE” wid OPEN EYES in ‘CAKE-FIGHTS’!!!// KO!!!! Structure - Tie, Yall had different ways of structurin ya verses, but both was effective. Multi's - Tay, both had multi's in ya verse, but Tay had more, and his were a little better. Overall - TAY G. This was definitely a hot ass battle. Props to both yall. I just felt like tay came harder. It seemed like every line was hot, Sight's was tight too but no as consistently sick as Tay's was. Tay had overwhelming punches and creativity and i think that really put him over the top. Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. |
^^^ Aiyo...Pimp Rawb is Tay Sin City or some shit cuz he doin D/R favors for votes on dis shit
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Yo its battles like this that make me wanna read both yalls shit more good battle i mean it...shit was good......SinCity..nice word play and vocab. the best line was
"I?l squash this Gay Prickk, & makin? ?SENSE? of sellin Brain is ?Barely-An-OCCUPATION?// (cents) ?Stop-Playin?, Ya Asshole?s ?Filled With More MATES? than ?AUSTRALIAN-CONVERSATIONS?!!!// ^^thats some dope shit Worst Line:"Reword ya ?Verbage-Bitch?, U only like holdin? mics coz it reminds u of ?JERKIN-DICKKS?// I?ll rip out ya EYES to EAT EM & Rip Out Ma GUTS coz ya ?iN?-?SIGHT? aint WORTH-A-?SHIT?!! ^^even its the worst line its still dope Advise try to make it flow better dats bout it. N-Sight's best line:"Faggot, u 'force shit' like ur constipated..you're constantly hated..- Not because your plots are great..but because you're drops are played" ^^nice word play wit dat shit... Worst Line:"WTF!?! kid I'll rip you like 'junk mail'..toss you 'a 'side' like with a chicken dinner..- Get 'off my dick' cuz I don't need to 'stress my point'..you will NOT be the winner."\ ^^it didnt relate at all but it was still a aaight line. im gonna vote for sincity cause his shit was too nice to just not like it..N-Sight try to use better words and make it relate better. V:SinCity I droped one for you now you do the same for me...its on the first page LyricleSolja Vs. Cinco |
@Whoeva's DQin My Votes: Suck A Dick And Stop DQin My Votes. I'm One Of The Few People I've Seen On Here Who Actually Puts Thought Into Their Votes. This Some Fuckin Bullshit I Swear.
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Nigga stop actin like a bitch DQ'n all my votes! I aint said shit about r d/rs comin up in here. Nigga, u lost str8 up. Ya verse was wackk as fuckk, and I wrote more complex shit in da 5th grade! I knew u was gonna try and pull some hit like this! Fuckk dat... all my votes COUNT!! |
Fuckkdatshit cuzz...! I got 5 votes already and u DQ'd 3 of em?????? WDF??? U on some gay shit dawg... U already lost, jus take it aint stop bitchin. I aint asked nobody to vote on this shit...
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tay-ur verse r really complex...u have multies...sum crazy metas....
gud wordplay.... only thing wit u though dawg....is ur structure is hard to follow....n that counts a lot in a text battle...coz i found myself havin 2 read ya linez twice to get tha punch....u need structure that people can follow coz it ruins ya flow. i also think ur punches are 2 weak ‘Spray-Rhymes’ & I’ll cut off ya LEFT arm so u can Spell Ya ‘Name-“RIGHT”’!// No Games I ‘Take-Shine’ & he couldn’t SEE a “slice of the PIE” wid OPEN EYES in ‘CAKE-FIGHTS’!!!// KO!!!! i mean thats a great beta n very creative..but u cnt hit cats wit shit bout cake-fights! i mean it makes sense..but u gotta cum harder..its a battle! n-sight...ur structure woz more basic..but thats all thats needed it flowed well. punches maybe wernt as creative as tay`s but they hit a lot harder like this How the fuck you gettin' votes speakin' jibberish..bitch, you are illiterate..- Ur whole verse sounds ignorant..anyone who speaks English won't consider it..- gud punch basically n-sight takes this on punches n personals..also he had beta flow creativity n metas/multies goes to tay....... but its a battle n punches n personals r wot count n-sight jus keep bringin it like that tay-cum harder n u`ll b a sick mc my vote n-sight... |
Yo N-SIGHT had some good puches, and well dilivered, Tay.G had better flow so I'm going for N-Sight, since he had good puches
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n-sight prolly got more d/rs..u can tell cuz he got a vote or two his shit wasnt even comparable to tay gs
hi flow was not off and n-sight just upset cuz hes not as skilled...not sayin u suck but ur not gonna win this with out d/rs kid.. n-sight your shit was hot and had good punches and flow but wasnt as consistent with those as much as tay gs was.... my vote is for tay G |
^^^ STFU...I'd rip ur herb...
LMAO @ noobies wit fucked up structure...suck a dick now uppin for votes 1 |
i liked this battle but i gotta go with n site on this one i definitly think he got it
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this was an okay battle
tay-your shit was okay but only that.........you came okay wti your punches but you need to elevate and work on re-wording them.........pc.........oh and work on your structure it is mad fucked n-sight- your shit was good........you also need to work on your structure but it was alot better then his..............you came hard wit your punches and they hit hard.......keep it up man......pc v/Nsight |
*Tay.G*SinCity* best punch- Stop-Playin’, Ya Asshole’s “Filled With More MATES” than ‘AUSTRALIAN-CONVERSATIONS’!!!// KO!
structure was on point as well as ya flow .::N-Sight::. best line U fuckin' buggin' teachin' ur daughter..phonics when you can't even drop logic..- ya wordplay was tight and ya had more personals but u need to up on ya vocab v/ n-sight |
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