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i don't care who you'll vote for i just want it closed and out the way.............
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^^I agree...
Can we get some votes. |
..............................This Still Not Ended......................................
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breakdown:
daclassic: It's going to take a little magic,There's no hocus pocus I'm bout to make this Deadlyvision get his eyez focused ^^hott opener good punch 7/10 You steady thinking and typing a verse you thinking of biting No biting, Don't take me as a peace a cake when you writing ^^lolgood meta but bad punch 5/10 Lyric incision coming through you as sharp as a cleat be Even if you cut my legs off, You still couldn't defeat me ^^defeat me lines are played no respect for that 0/10 he's not even close to lyrical, bragging that he a miracle I'm a have this dude retire from rapping to being spiritual ^^good wordplay strong punch 7/10 I'll baptize you for rapping religous in the shit that you wrote If that was the case, Then I'll physically beat you into a pope ^^another good punch hott closer 8/10 overall: 27/50 (54%) deadlyvision: ^^Kid 1st ur punches are like female hits they all sound whack/ How u claiming ur tough? is like mannequins it's all a fake act/.. Kid face it i'ma above u, skill is what u lack, Put uneven #'s in ur head to show how the odds are stacked/.. ^^hott opener good wordplay and metas bad structure 7/10 Bitch I punch ya line and ya 4s-been-met....steping up 2 Me u get smacked da way bitches-get-checked/.. Only time dis kid fly is up in a bird nest, My punches will leave ur organs by ur heart now he really 'Up-Set'/.. IQ of a Genius?? I leave ya mental capacity in catastrophy, squeezin ya brain an slam ya head,I've damned-ur-cred/ ^^good bar nice shyt but structure once again is off but still hott 7/10 Profane Frees,Explain Please...how the Tip of ya Dick is ur 'Main Squeeze'/.. Comin at Dv U - fag - now how u gonna spit rhymez witta Brain FreeZe/.. ^^lmfao hott shyt here 8/10 It's like im throwin stones at At "blueprint", cuz I'm "rockin-yo-dome"/.. Classic? I Leave ya frame like a pocket-of-bones... u think your electrifyin? when really your "sockets-is-blown"/.. ^^dam hott finisher best bar 10/10 overall: 32/40 vote: DV...overall better verse and the last 2 bars ended it |
v/ DaClassic.
More original.. both of you came with mad played punches an concepts.. Classic less so.. `odds stack up` an `mannequins` lines were bad.. Classic flowed better an structure made it easier to follow.. DV was lookin` stretched thruout. Vote on this: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121685 |
I agree with casual....
I thought DaClassic won this one with his better flow and his punches semmed to hit a little harder. Deadly came OK but his punches seemed to lack strength. I understand it was a quickly keyed piece but I think that DaClassic's just came off a little bit harder. Also, DV's flow was off in some spots....... Vote - DaClassic.....Sorry I couldn't help you close this but could you guys drop a vote in this battle between me and creativitie? http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...16&page=4&pp=15 |
thinks for the votes but keep them coming
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Ok.
UppUN> |
yo, this was a pretty good battle. But I think DV came harder on this one.
Daclassic, you had a tight spit an all, but this was not one of your best battles. You had some good punches, but only a few hit really hard. Your flow was aiight, but it went off in a few places. But overall it was a pretty good spit. Not yo best though. DV, you had a nice spit, man. You had some nice hard hittin' punches. I also felt your flow for the most of it. Good spit. Not the best, but it was nice. V/ DV |
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