uppin les finish this.............................

cmon kan someone vote on this.....................

my vote goes to...........ummm....Lyrical

Lyrical you had better punches but you still need to work on your punches so that they hit harder try rewording them and work on your structure a lil bit man......pc

damn good ass battle but my vote goes to PoTeNtIaL just cause he had a way betta wordplay and punches den da otha cat his verse flowed betta to everythin was on point

v/PoTeNtIaL
you if you aint gotta a crew check out lyrical legends
holla.

method for talking all that shit you got merked

punches:p
flow:p
struture:p
wordplay:method
personals:p
overall:potential

can you guys return the fava and vote on my battles the links are on my sig thanks

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Structure = Pot
Wordplay = Meth
Punches = Draw
Flow = Pot
Personals = Draw

Overall Vote = PoTeNtIaL

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easiest pussy i ever merked....fuckin fag.....4-1.....one more vote to finish this.......thanks to all dat voted.....illl return the favor....and i lil, im a fre agent......uppin

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after this battle, you won't be able to put your mind on this/
cuz the only shit you'll be good for is the special olympics/ 5...Average at best

i can't lose cuz im 1 of the clumps/(get it)
talkin shit, i'll sqeeze off one time and make your dick look like a thumb/ 4...wtf

i ain't a vet but yet i can rest, cuz my punches fly everywhere like a verbal tec/
i can care less if you spit hard, cuz even if you had toxic breath, BITCH, you couldn't breathe death/ 5...Decent again

and i am the best, i ain't the rest/
cuz i'll rip you haulter top to expose your breast/(PUSSY) 4...WHACK

you goin under ,craka hold your breath/
i got yah verse chokin like its blowin meth/ 3...WHACK

you way 2 wack, you can't be black/
the only heat you hold is your is your thermis in you back-pac/ 4...Again Terrible

im NEVER wack, you must be smokin crack, cuz the only way you winnin is if vanilla ice comes back and votes on that ^^^^^^/ 4...Ehhh

its ova jack, u can't fight back/
im disabling your verse's connecting like i fuckin repo rap/ 3....BAD

i got the gear, im bout to break the mold/
you structure is lookin fukin stupid like 2 left toes/ 3...Somewhat Humerous

im way past froze, im spittin sub-zero floes/
my verses's tighter than brazilian's and fuckin speedo's/ 5...Comedic

you don't deserve a win, like strobe im revokin it/
you better off askin lyrical destuction to let you in/ 4...NO

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Rhyming’s a science and “method” wuz “formulated” by a bad “hypothesis”/ If “rhymin wack” is a treasure then yo rhymes is “priceless” !! 6...Nice Thought

He’s got no rite -to- compete like drugged-up athletes / Only time he feels “instant heat” is when he’s close-to-defeat 5...Decent

He can only win one way, but den he’d forfeit to deceit/ His rhymes couldn;t get “recognition in his autobiography 5...Decent

If you “think before you speak” then no one would “hear your voice”/ How can you be “destined to rhyme” when you was “ducking the choice”* 5....

He in love wit his “clit” and lyke the “love struk” he bein pussy-whipped/ Im constructive criticism, but the way he “breaking rules“ he’d never “take-a-tip”** 6...

Saying “i mus not be blak, im wak” bitch color doesnt decide skill/ Cuz im leavin ya name green lyke billz an uya rhymes bein thrown stull aint comin ill*** 5...Decent

You cud be killed in a cement mixer but your “devotion to losin” makes u neva die-hard/ Only tyme yo “identity” is “presumed” to be iLL is when you stole a “credit card” 6...Better


His punches “cummin up short” lyke a “6 n 9” pulled out by an elf/ He wanted to dis “a pussy and a rookie” so he started dissin himself**** 7...lol


Hittin “below the belt” neva risin with a level lower den “missy elliot”/ How am i gonna disagree when he ADMITS all his spit nuthin but rhyme shit 4...Decent


[u]Obviously Potential Took this battle......Lyrical, ya need hella help on ya punches and complexity.......

Vote: Potential

Ya rhymes would never “shake the crowd” if it had its own “vibrations”/ Neva get “awards” by tryin to “affect the masses” cuz ya rhymes will get “”lost in translation”*****

Ya rhymes would never “shake the crowd” if it had its own “vibrations”/ Neva get “awards” by tryin to “affect the masses” cuz ya rhymes will get “”lost in translation”*****6

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