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Untold 05-25-04 10:39 PM

Multis-both
Flow-four
Punches-marv
Personals-four
Creativity-marv
wordplay-both
my vote-marv

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 05-25-04 11:38 PM

Fourmost

Sparkin Beef Wit Provokin Verbs/ Ya Barkin Without Teeth 'n' Can't Understand Those Spoken Words/1
Decent 6/10

Left Beggin On Tha Street Chokin On Bum's Nerds//Gaggin On Mans Meat Like You Smokin Tha Herbs//2
Ok But Strechted 5/10

/Gleam Of Fame Crushed Like Broken Bone Marrow/ Ya Rhymin Scheme Is Flushed wit Bars That Aint No Aero/3
NO!!!^^^ NO!!!! 2/10

//Dis Ciggarette Tips His Anal Shaped Sombero// Smoke Dis Fag 'n' Destory Like The Cape Passero//(wordplay)4
Ok Decent 6/10


/Like Will Farrell I got Peeps Laughin At Ya Abnormalities/ No Hitler But Terrorizin Like ya Jew Waitin For Ya Fatality/5
NICE!!! 8/10

//Ya Diss Full Wit General Technicalities 'n' Dats Playin Wit Fiya//Bring Back To Reality As I Make Ya Clique Retire//6
5/10

I Will Lyrically Injure Marv 'n' Make Ya Look Like A Starved Draqueen Named Ginger/7
NO 3/10

/
Showcase You On Jerry Spinger Unda Tha Title My Asshole Is Where He Stuck His
Finger/8
Good Finisher 6/10


Break DOwn

Flow 7/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 5/10
Punches 7/10
66/120.


MaRvoLousJ

u'z a little bitch da type da call da fedz,when i reach and draw da lead-
y do u rap dogg ya fukkin "flow gets sleeped on" like "water-beds"-
Nice !! 8/10


im da sickest on rb trust dis brother...marvolousjay son spit gutta-
ya career gon be like "stevie gettin punched once" u gon be a "1 hit wonder"-
(think about dat)
okk 5/10


rap battles out of me and dis fagget u know which writer's is hotter-u'z a lame dogg only "hit-single" u eva gon have is "fightin a dollar"-
OO SHIT thas hott 8/10


its nothin talk badd dunn u'll be recievin dem shot & die be4 u flee 2 da cops- when i post somthin whut u readin is hott,jay if u dont believe dat he's hott-dogg i'll put
da "pump in ya mouth" like i was waitin 4 ya "wezzin da stop"-you come da queens? dogg datz like "lil kim spendin a weekend with pac"-
decent 5/10


Flow 5/10
Rhymes 6/10
Punches 6/10
Structure 7/10
50/80



Four Most Comes away wit my Vote

V/FourMost

E Looch 05-26-04 12:36 AM

lol how the fuck

50/80 is a way higher percent then 66/120

lmfao damn marv now i see how u lose

Fourmost 05-26-04 09:14 AM

Uppin, Wut eva my punches were just as hard or harder than his, and i had more multi-s, but i hear wut ya sayin wit the 50/80 and 66/120 shit, but i think dudes ratings are off a little anyway

SLUT! 05-26-04 09:23 AM

Multis-tie
structure-marv
Flow-marv
Punches-marv
Personals-marv
Creativity-tie
wordplay-four
opener-marv
closer-marv

v/marv becuase his verse had the better punches and personals and that is obviously what gets you the win

cityboi.......your a fucking retard.......you said marv took the punches and personals and you gave four the win because he had the creativity and wordplya.....you fucking stupid mand.,.....only way he would have wun that way is if everything else was tied.,......you shouldnt even be alllowed to vote


but anyways hit this up wit an honest vote
my first ever battle

Mad Dog 05-26-04 10:56 AM

Multis-tie
Flow-marv
Punches-marv
Personals-four
Creativity-four
wordplay-four
overall-four

v/Fourmost

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insanedialect 05-26-04 01:57 PM

Multis-marv
Flow-fourmost
Punches-marv
Personals-fourmost
Creativity-fourmost
wordplay-marv
overall-ima give it to four but not by that much

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Beyond Logic 05-26-04 08:50 PM

Multis- tie
Flow- tie
Punches- marv
Personals- none
Creativity- four
metas- four
overall- fourmost

overall this battle was pretty dope, my fav lines from each:

fourmost-
Gleam Of Fame Crushed Like Broken Bone Marrow/ Ya Rhymin Scheme Is Flushed wit Bars That Aint No Aero/3
//Dis Ciggarette Tips His Anal Shaped Sombero// Smoke Dis Fag 'n' Destory Like The Cape Passero

dope vocab n concept

marv-
im da sickest on rb trust dis brother...marvolousjay son spit gutta-
ya career gon be like "stevie gettin punched once" u gon be a "1 hit wonder"-

nice wordplay there

Pop Lotty 05-26-04 09:38 PM

Multis-four
Flow-marv...four Had Some Stretched Bars In His Shyt That Fucked It Up
Punches-marv....first Three Bars Were Killa...fours Were Good To Though But Damn..them First Three, Whoo
Personals-aint Catch None
Creativity-four Got This...i Aint Know Wut All That Cape Perro Shyt Was About...but U Explained It And U Killed Marv In That Category
Wordplay-four...marvs Punches Were Hot..but The Word Play Was Kind Of Off
Overall-marv Won This Cuz The Important Shyt In Battles Are Punches, And Marv Jus Came Wit It

Pop Lotty 05-26-04 09:41 PM

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125426
CAN YALL RETURN THE FAVOR AND DROP VOTES ON THIS

Big Kountry 05-26-04 09:42 PM

Multis-marv
Flow-fourmost
Punches-marv
Personals-fourmost
Creativity-fourmost
wordplay-marv
overall-ima give it to four but not by that much

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Big Kountry 05-26-04 09:43 PM

return the favor links are in the sig hi them all up

BigTony.Self 05-27-04 12:16 PM

Yo I Thought Marv Spit A Decent Verse Not His Best But It Was Aight Needed More Punches In It I Thought Im Not Gonna Say Format This And That Cuz Dudes Been Here Long Enuff They Know How They Want There Shit

But I Thought Four Was Lil More Onpoint With Delivery And Wordplay Just Had Em This Time I Thought But Close Enuff To Assume That Marv Could Win The Next Battle Between Em....

MARVOLoUsJ1009 05-28-04 12:55 PM

lmaoooooooooooooo awww man dis gon be my last battle on da frontlines u niggaz cant vote 4 shit

Pop Lotty 05-28-04 05:45 PM

Wtf...muhfuckas Cant Return Fuckin Favors...i Voted Right Didnt I...can U Go Vote On My Shyt


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