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-   -   KiNg SoLo .::VS::. Ecko296 (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=126797)

:.Faceless.: 05-27-04 09:33 AM

alright Blak Siinz and I are one in the same.......^^^so there is my vote...i needed 250 posts so i got on this name

.::N-Sight::. 05-27-04 10:15 AM

I’ll choke u with ure own flow tying ure lines around ure neck-yo
And have my first rhyme deafening u like a never-ending ECK-O [echo]

^^ good punch forced rhyming

With an Authentik IQ I roll with the AI crew…I’m lyrically intellectual
Then this fool, can’t tell what sex are you…u must be a fuckin transsexual
Like a heat-seeking missile my lyrical spits will come at you directly
U shud forget battling for now and take a lesson on how to vote correctly.


^^ decent all around punches...nothing special

imma murder this faggot like he was motherfucken royalty
fuck nicky fletcher............. he aint nuthin but a girl to me
he gon' get tore up like he was in jail........he dropped the soap
fucker get off me.....theres no time to fucken grope

^^^ NO NO NO NO ..this isn't doing anything to SOLO...use personals...and leave the PICTURES OUT...thats some Latinkitten wack shit...aiight

u wear all black cuz u know this is ur fucken funeral
u got no fuckin.... turns(chances).......this aint now fucken sterring wheel
u say ur royalty unborn but ur dopeness doesnt show
although u's a king you'll never be on my plateau
this is the Eckz-Factor and im always right on point
im rippin u to peices solo fuckin Joint for joint

^^ This is too simple...set-up ur punches with some level of complexity

Also...im not feeling starting each line out with U..U..U...U

Vote: King...better all around verse

FlowIntelligent. 05-27-04 11:06 AM

king solo:

I’ll choke u with ure own flow tying ure lines around ure neck-yo
And have my first rhyme deafening u like a never-ending ECK-O [echo]
^^hott opener good meta nice shyt 9/10
Fuck this clown, he recognises royalty…see’s me and bows down
I run his crew; I’m in the back of his sig, lyin back wearin my crown
^^nice flip off his sig but it aint that hott 5/10
I’ll beat ure ass with just a twist of my wrist and a clench of my fist
Already beaten Black Thief & Anxiety, u just another on my chryme list
^^str8 bar decent punch 6/10
No wonder u in the Chryme Sindicate cuz lyrically u fuckin breakin laws
Rhymes like sex and u still a virgin, cudn’t get a HO if u were Santa Claus
^^lol good shyt here hott 8/10
With an Authentik IQ I roll with the AI crew…I’m lyrically intellectual
Then this fool, can’t tell what sex are you…u must be a fuckin transsexual
^^good multies and wordplay str8 punch 7/10
Like a heat-seeking missile my lyrical spits will come at you directly
U shud forget battling for now and take a lesson on how to vote correctly.
^^hott ass closer good personal 9/10

overall: 44/60 (73%)

ecko296:

imma murder this faggot like he was motherfucken royalty
fuck nicky fletcher............. he aint nuthin but a girl to me
^^str8 but u say fuck too much and it looks gay 5/10
he gon' get tore up like he was in jail........he dropped the soap
fucker get off me.....theres no time to fucken grope
^^gay bar and too much "fucking" 2/10
u gonna get tricked....look who has the crown motherfucker
go lick a lolipop fool im not the one whos the sucka
^^not hott all i gotta say 3/10
people must think u gay.. cuz u make the point to say u straight
u jus a fucken wannabe of alexander the great
^^no not hott either 4/10
u wear all black cuz u know this is ur fucken funeral
u got no fuckin.... turns(chances).......this aint now fucken sterring wheel
^^woulda been hott if u said fuck less 6/10
u say ur royalty unborn but ur dopeness doesnt show
although u's a king you'll never be on my plateau
^^hott bar 7/10
this is the Eckz-Factor and im always right on point
im rippin u to peices solo fuckin Joint for joint
^^there it is with the "fuck" again but decent closer 5/10

overall : 32/70 (46%)

vote: KiNg SoLo

king solo you had some nice punches more and more fire from you in every verse i see good shyt and nice personals and your structure isa always topnotch...work on better multies is all i gotta say and ecko say "fuck" less it makes your verse really weak

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