Ayo, plz return tha favor on me and Re$tricted's topical...both verses are up now, so thx...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126356

yo this topical battle was tight both verses came out strong n shit....i liked nsights verse cuz it seemed madd real and i liked killahs for he wordplay...but again both came out strong.....my votes goin to go wit nsight cuz i like shit that sounds madd real...killa i wasnt feelin that part when the guy gets stabed in the neck wit a tranquilizer let alone in the bank...i dont think that shit culd happin in the bank well ne ways my vote goes to nsight

ok here it goes..................................

N-SIGHT
i liked ure verse, u shit flowed well from start to finish although ure structure was a little off in places with some bars stretched. u had gud wordplay in ure spit and u told the story well. u didn't fall off topic which is always gud...obviously and basically u painted a gud picture, i cud picture that shit happenin which is a sign of a gud topical verse. the only thing, when these topics come up, like getting away from the police, and escapin from prison and shit, why does everyone always fuckin die at the end, i'd like to see sumone live for once...DAMN!!! LMFAO!!!
Overall - 8/10

KILLAH BWOY
playa u came gud in ure verse, i liked it. structure was on which was gud, no stretched bars and it all flowed well. u to told a gud story nad i cud get the image of it all happenin. u didn't fall off topic, although i didnt quite get why u put that gettin drugged in the neck line tho. u to went with killing the playa at the end...lmao!! the only thing i felt with ures was that ure person doing the getaway sounded like he had been poppin steroid pills or sumthin. i mean he gets drugged and is feelin woozy and weak but still manages to jump up and pull himself up into the ventilation system, and then he falls two fuckin storeys which aint no small drop and just gets up and brushes himself off, other than that tho u had a tight spit, but i think them parts were what let u down!!
Overall - 6.5/10

V/ - N-Sight

Kryogenix.::N-Sight::. i like your verse better b/c i think your verse showed more emotion and excitement. Killah Bwoy i like your verse too but i thought your could have expanded your mind farther than that^^^^^. Kryogenix thats a pussy vote just b/c somone ask you 4 a vote u vote against them. what a a bitch move. anyway my vote dosen'e go to the guy who pm's me necessarily b/c niggas b sleepin on battles cuz. Kryogenix nice verse dun, keep it up.

vote=Kryogenix

i put the wrong name in i was copyin and pasting names my fault. i meant .::N-Sight::.

^^^ lol...aiight dawg...i gotchu

yea...u were commentin on Kryo's bish move...


word...4-1 my way

good battle Killa. B.


uppin for more votes


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N-Sight ya shit was creativite...but at the beginning...I wasn't really feelin it that hard....I felt these lines right here....The bank-teller stuffed the last batch of 'Franklins' in the sack..-
My gat to her face..I didn't notice the 'PO-PO' roll up in the back..-
"Hurry up bitch," I was frantic..antsy-like as the cops advanced me..-
I snatched the bag and ran..see, but the fags in blue were mad deep..-
^^could've beeen better for an opener...because you killed it at the end
But I heard the cops gunnin'..my breath was getting shorter by the second..-
Them pigs finally caught me like.."Stop right there and put down your weapon!"..-
I froze in place like cryogenics..turned around slow and dropped the loot..-
But I kept my NINE by my side..and when I raised it, they started to shoot..-


**The money lay on the ground soaked in red..my hopes broke and dead..-
I tried to smoke the feds..but instead, I got smoked in the head..-**

^^I felt like I was really watchin it....lol Im a go get bent and play GTA Vice City now...lol

Killah Bwoy....as I read more of ya battles...Im feelin ya style more and more
Tied Up The Black Garbage Bag..Heavy From The Stacked Cash-
Got Me Sprintin' Out The Buildin' Like I was Runnin' A 100 M dash-
Eyes Rollin' Left To Right Saw About Forty Cop Uniforms In Sight-
Ran Back, Chained The Door And Made Sure I Locked It Tight-
A Customer And My HomeBoi Jay Lay Dead From The Cross-fire-
Getaway Car Shot Up No Fuel In The Tank Sittin On Flat Tires-
^^^Im lovin this shit!that was hot


A Young Man Came Behind Me And Injected A Drug Into My Neck-
Pulled It Out..Started To Feel Woozy, Aimlessly Firing My Tech-
My Mind Was Still Strong But My Body Was Beginnin' To Feel Weak-
Suddenly My Body Was freezin'..Put My Cold Hands On My Cheek-
The Bag Began To Feel Heavier So I Let It Drop Down To My Feet-
Then I Heard The Door Bangin' Drop Ur Weapons THIS IS THE POLICE!-
Stood Ontop Of A Table And Jumped Up Into The Ventalation System-
Could See Jay On The Bottom Floor Soaked In Blood..Damn I Missed Him-
This Isn't The Time To Feel Dishearted So Again I started Moving-
If I Got Away Id Have To Hide from the cops So either way Im Losing-
Fell 2 Stories High...Dusted Myself Off..Endin' Up In Some Dark Place-
Shattered Glass On Da Ground Showing Da Reflection Of my Weakend face-
SHIT I FORGOT THE LOOT Too Late Now..began runnin at a slow pace-
^^^umm this is where you lost it thought fam...I was confused about the nigga injectin shit in ya neck...and how the hell you weak and woozy yet you manage to jump in the ventilation and not only do that, but jump off of 2 stories and still be runnin?I dunno


Infa Red On The Back Of My Head But My Vision Was Pointed A Head-
BOOOM Shocked I Fell To The Ground...Killah Bwoy Was Dead-
^^this was an excellent closer....and it would be evene better if you had some fire lyrics before it

Killah.... you would've won this if you kept on your roll but you lost it after that injected line all the way to ya closer.....but it was a hot battle and good battle between 2 good mcs but my vote goes to N-Sight