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Publicity 05-29-04 01:47 PM

lmao......DON if u actually think u won this,i feel bad for u.....and those are such obvious dickrides,should be reported....that one dude even lives in deleware like u...but n e wayz i just had to leave my opinion cuz u are runnin ur mouth so much when ur verse was just plain terrible

pz

Nascent 05-29-04 02:05 PM

DON is wack as fuck...

...nuf said...

philly and hilly?

seriously....fuckin faggot...

DONs punches didnt connect at all, they hit nothin but air.....

just straight wackness...

this site has so much dickriding its not even funny....DON got served....

nuff said...

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mC RIOT 05-29-04 02:16 PM

aight man this was close but i gotta give the battle to ma man lyrically...he is just straigh up dope compurred to DON...nice name too

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HoPe 05-29-04 02:19 PM

wth???ight..first...Don killed da other newb..well basicly i could beat both of ya at da same time wit out tryin..thats how much this battle shows how weak you are...

spit: don
punch:don
multi: none
flow:don

vote don

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DaCROZofHB 05-29-04 02:40 PM

wow lyrical that was fuckin terrible, u need to grab a shotgun and shoot ur tongue off and every single finger so u can no longer say another line or write another line.
Don good drop even tho u could of just used da opener to kill dis kid,

v=Don

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Sik Wit It 05-29-04 02:41 PM

Tha DON had punches and the shit was funny...Lyrikal...hardly saw any punches 'n' shit in there...

Vote = DON

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White Light 05-30-04 12:59 AM

Don: was feeling ur lines more

Flow and Structure:
ur ryhmes flowed good ur structure add 2 it 7/10

Personals and Punchlines:
u had some here and there most of em hit pretty hard... this was your best section of the battle.... 7.5 or 7/10

overall: 7/10

Lyrically: wasn't reallly feeling your lines gotta practice more...

Flow and Structure:
ur flow was ok 5/10 mabye 6/10 ur structure wasn't dat great so it didn't add 2 it...

Personals and Punchlines:
u had none... so some advice add some 2 ur next verse u spit in a battle... 0/10

overall: 5/10

Winner: Don
by far no competition... his punchlines and personals took the battle cuz lhyrical didn't have any.... and his rhymes flowed more....

-bODy CoUnT- 05-30-04 01:03 AM

Abusive:1 i felt like lyricallys spit didnt even rhyme, his structure was all off. 2 his personal was soft.3 i saw no punchlines..
DON:1 opener was whack.2 Punches were hard. Responded hard to abusives comments... Win: DON

roop 05-30-04 01:05 AM

Diz could hav been a betta battle but lyrical came weak

Punches-Don took diz because lyrical u didnt have any

Flow-Don had better flow, lyrics u were jus lacking it at times but keep practcing

Orignality and Complexity-Not to shabby don keep it up, lyrical u were krap

Overall-Don took diz battle wit ease but lyrical jus keep workin on it and add punches

Vote Don


return da favor at my battle, link in da sig

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 05-30-04 01:28 AM

HOW MANY VOTES got D/q'd shit


Don got this wun over all cause he rhymed more but u lacked Vocab n Wordplay good vErse tho

Lyricalyabusiv ur lines where 2 short and didint rhyme i think u nneeed tto elavate

Break Down

Lyricalyabusiv

Flow 4/10
Rhymes3/10
Punches 4/10
Sturcture 3/10
Vocab 2/10
Wordplay 3/10
19/60

DON

FLow 5/10
Rhymes 6/10
Punches 7/10
Structure 3/10
Vocab 4/10
Wordplay 4/10
29/60


V/DON


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