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ok...genie...ur sturcture cldnt be any beta...mulits were kickin off like woah!!vocab cld be worked on and also wordplay..overal..9/10
L.I.flow wasnt thur coz u didnt keep the same shylbol count in every line...structure was nice..vocab also cld be worked on..overll 8/10.. Both nice But Genie Was A Different Class...keep Em' Cumin'..Pz v/genie Crew vote removed |
Aight. This dont count because is a crew vote.
But Up on this. No Bitchin in this crew battle. Only votes expected. |
Aiyo One Last Thing..
Aiyo HeXen Who Merked You Twice? That Was Me..Battle Verse and Topical LMAO....Yea I Will Battle Genie In A Topical... Nice Drops Here...Just Uppin Dis Shit..Mad Sleeping.. ~R~ |
yo R man no h8..but dunt shit on genie wen u dunt even no him..aiiight.no beef
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Up yo. How come no1 votin in topicals anymore dammit.
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BREAKDOWN
Genie ure verse was tight son, u had to have the best fuckin structure i have ever seen and ure flow was dope as fuck. u stayed on topic and it was a interesting verse to read. u had sum gud wordplay throughout the verse and a fair amount of multis dropped in there to. overall a top drop ... near perfect!! OVERALL 9.5/10 L.I. ure flow was gud playa as always but genie had u beat their and on the structure. ure structure was gud but the lines weren't all perfect same length. u dropped a nice verse and u to stayed on topic from start to finish. i liked every part, it all had sum gud wordplay in there but some was pretty basic and there wasn't many multis if any that i cud find. a tight drop but this time i think u were bested only just tho!! OVERALL 9/10 V/ - Genie |
Genie....u had awsome structer i liked how everything was lined up...gud shit...ur wordplay was good through out the whole verse...u stayed on topic......other than that very good drop.....
L.I......u verse was good to.....ur stucture was gud as usual but i think he took this catagory...ur wordplay was nice u stayed on topic overall very good verse overall i think genie took this he had better stucture thats all i can think of why he took it cuz both verses were hot....it was pretty even through out but when it came to structure he took it keep em comin homies |
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first off..great verses by both,genie had tite structure,cudnt fault it..id say l.i less so but his structure woz tite also....jus unlucky 4 u genies woz bout as tite as it gets.
both cats verses flowed really neat,very easy to read n follow..wasnt much in it there. i think overall genie had the beta wordplay,mad creativeness..again l.i woz tite also jus that little bit behind..not much though. multies were blowing off from both cats wit genie droppin more complex ones. overall genie i cudnt fault his verse...was prob the tightest ive seen 9.5/10 l.i-great drop also..wudve bin enough to beat probably anyone else... only thing id say is add more complex wordplay,n creativity. 8.5/10 cnt vote yet....but genie took this props 2 both though...jus keep it up peeps |
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genie- dope verse my friend. im gonna have to agree with everyone else in regards to your struc.......shit was smooth. you had a nice indepth verse and i was impressed by your multies and vocab. sick drop bruh. i look forward to peeping more from you.
l.i.- very nice work as well. i dug your story, it was quite amusing my friend. overall, i liked your verse and think that you got some talent. i dont think that your spit was on the same level as genies, but you still fucked shit up. keep up the good work playboy. my vote- genie sick topical battlecats. much love fellas. one. s.v...................c.s. |
i guess my vote wont count though. nice again, good job.
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Aint 3-0=KO?
ama ask strobe. If not Up |
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Up.
You Imputent Hoes. |
fuck up there........
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