PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR WITH AN HONEST VOTE IN THIS BATTLE:

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128717

check it look at this fag he called the storm when hes fulled with softness and dickless/ pulling the damn trigger making this wannbe helpless

^^^ not liking ur structure or rhyming

the storm is a fag not a prositute but a he- whore/ while he bangin with other men
he aslo scremin no- more

i respect he from england he alot style and taste/ but pls nigga leave this site its running up yo bill and its a waste


^^^ punches are not connecting
my flow is deadly fatser than randy johnson in a sprint/im knowcking on his dome until its obliviuated and has a dent

as you can see i have now calmed the strom its a nice gentle brezze/ as you can see hes at rest, laid to be, and at ease


^^^ Was not a creative verse metaphorically speaking


15/30

reppin DK,ima call u B.K..coz u am gona grill,only way u gon b hot n make u ill/
u neva get wit ma sick-spill, style lifeless like i gave u tha contraceptive-pill/
u cnt find my level...i leave you lost like the city of ATLANTIS/
like snoop dogg im tha bo$$....u ma pray and i`m the MANTIS/

^^ good personals and you came more creatively with metas and wordplay


Vote: T Storm

i thought this was an ok battle both need to elevate but still 1ne sided......t-storm merked this kid....
punches:t-storm
flow:t-storm
Multis:t-storm
personals:t-storm

vote:t-storm

elevate...........

upin
 

upin..........

drop an honest vote
drop a link will return an honest vote...

this battle was aight...Vin your shit was aight more like a freestyle...
just work and elevate..T you had some nice punches and personals..and you used
some nice wordplay..
vote-T-storm

drop an honest one

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128721

ok
 

vinman- basic verse weak punches.no personals...structure weak

t-storm...nice spit...gud structure/flow

punches were good.......1st line...the personal woz gud
beta wordplay/creativity


vote-storm

Yeah Nice verses from both. i dont have enough to vote, so i'm not givin feedback.
in the meantime hit up the (finished) link at the bottom

A'ight this was a weak battle...no need to break it down...vinman, you need to elevate a lot dawg...you need to werk on some better punches, strucure, flow tha works...the punches you did have were played as fuck...elevate. T-storm, you came better than vinman wit some decent punches and overall better flow. Both elevate.

Vote- T-Storm

No hate. Return tha favor.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130043

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130054