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-   -   Killah Bwoy Vs deadly rhymez 01 (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=127529)

Vango 06-02-04 01:54 AM

Yo This Was Way One Sided, Killah Had Better Multis, Better Punches, Deadly You Need To Elevate Your Punches Didnt Hit Hard And You Rhymes Were Pretty Basic, Nice Closer From Killah.

V-killah

LaTiNKiTTeN 06-02-04 02:18 AM

was gonna vote for killa but he blacklisted me.......anyway....first dude,nothin in ur verse.....no punches really......killa u didnt have punches either so i had to judge on flow n multies......killa's was better....although his rhyme schemes were pretty basic,he did have more multies which resulted in better flow......i dont like the dashes.......but yea...........based on that i woulda voted for killa

Triple_N 06-02-04 02:38 AM

Decent battle

Deadly............ok your verse can't be described any other way than wack, man you didn't have punches, you just dropped big names which you should only do of you are good at wordplay or can make a ill punch out of it, you did neither, you had no personals, I can't think of anything good to say bout it, man you need to seriously elevate
Flow: 6/10
Punches: 4/10
Personals 1/10
Metas: 1/10
Creativity 2/10
Overall: 14/50

Killa Bwoy.........your verse was jus ok, it had some punches but they were weak, persoanls not really any there, you had multies but they were kinda forced, you had a few metas, nothing really special but ok drop
Flow: 3/10
Punches: 7/10
Personals: 4/10
Metas: 4/10
Creativity: 5/10
Overall: 23/50
Vote: killa Bwoy

Killah Bwoy 06-02-04 07:46 AM

upn this.............................................. ...

CounTREE Jay 06-02-04 07:50 AM

Aight, don't have time for an official breakdown, but y'all both big-upped yourselves more than dissed your opponent, but Killah's was more creative, better wordplay, had some hard punches, just a level above deadly I think, but it's all good. I give this one to Killah, but both y'all need to diss your opponent more than make yourself look good.

~CJ~

DaCROZofHB 06-02-04 10:13 AM

deadly- you just had the average flow, nuthing special, not the worst. it was juts aight for me work on your structure, put some multis in.
Killa-good shit you beat dis cat, punchlines were off the hook for sure meng, and it was just ann alround victory for you.
v=killa

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 06-02-04 01:05 PM

Yo Killah Bwoy Tell Strobe to put a Extra vote For FreSh_EmCeE

J Gutta 06-02-04 05:41 PM

aight nice battle from both ends but

ithink killa took this wit better flow..structure.. punches...and vocab and worplay

deadly u had nice shit too ,,,but killa bwoy got dis battle nice battle wun be easy

v/killa bwoy


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