uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!

I’m brawlic, brawl you for quarters, call this a warnin//
I’m the safest nigga in prison, call me the warden//
I use ‘black ink’ slipped in syringes to penetrate//
So you ‘take shots’ of my text, till ya liver dissentagrates// - Humerous opener, you've brought some funny punches here, used some different types of wordplay, I really felt the Inheritance line later on in the verse also... This wasn't the best I've seen you drop but still a good verse, I felt most of your punches and I think you were able to pull off higher complexity than your opponent here.


Im schoolin u...n im surprised u could find the nerve
cuz im the director...n ill show u theres action behind my words - I think this was your best bar of your verse, the punch was decent and the wordplay wasn't played, the rest of the verse however I found kind of basic, it had a good structure but the punchlines were very simple, and concepts I've seen before-- Decent Verse all in all but I think Maku came harder here... Good luck in the future.

maku=2
blaq ink=0

uppin 4 votes...............

good battle
 

not trying to hate or dick ride maku jaillin, but black i think he took you on this one.. not saying your shit suck, he just ahd nothing but punchs left and right..

vote maku

good battle
 

not trying to hate or dick ride maku jaillin, but black i think he took you on this one.. not saying your shit suck, he just ahd nothing but punchs left and right..i thought blacks flowed together better, but black gotta remeber punches with battles

vote maku
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I like maku's style. i'll vote on ya'll two in a sec

[IMG]www.suicidemethods.net/ pix/thurston.jpg[/IMG] I FUCKED YOUR MUM

http://www.suicidemethods.net/pix/thurston.jpg I FUCKED YOUR MUM

damn...mad props to ya'll both that was hot...one of the best yet, that i read...not too short, not too long, thats perfect...i hate doing al that reading...but imma give it up to maku...his was hotter, he/she had me droppn mi jaw on some shit...blaq, u did too...GOOD SHIT.

v/maku

uppin 4 votes
thanks for the props everyone, lets continue