aight...Lil trip...you need to work on your structure and your vocab...all these "yo" words are annoyin as hell and take away from the quality of your verse...but anyways..your verse was decent..no punches that really stood out...but it was decent...not a verse to be slept on by any means

aint "chinese", but yall still gon watch me eat-this-feline/
this nigga doesnt spit "Quality" unless he spittin Talib Kweli-lines/

this was your best line smith...and I'm 50/50 on it..because as good as it sounds..it's not to creative since talib kweli always refers to kweli bein a e-kweli-ty...so it was pretty un original...never the less...it was nice...I will give you credit for it..i luiked your structure a lot more than trips..and your flow was nicer... decent punches but not too many hard hitting back breaking ones....good battle

vote: smith

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