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Ketch:
personals/5 punches/6 structure/3 creativity/5 Rascal: personals/7 punches/5 structure/4 creativity/7 rascal wins this but just barly.......you need to write your shit up when you find the person to battle because it isnt any gud if its prewritten.....but yeah keep elevating both of you |
thanx i appriciate the votes.. leaves links and ill hit them up.. |
Yo, not bad verses from either MCs. Ketch had good punches and wordplay, whereas Rascal your's seemed to not make any sense in parts or seemed a lil corny. for example...
Cuz Any Dream With you Rappin Is Really a scary NIGHTMARE.. Dat was jus horrible, sorry... and.. oh how kind your servin me a win, thanx waiter.. wow your bringin heat to this battle with a portable radiator.. Dat was aiight, but made da beginning of your verse fall off a lil bit... You did have some hot lines doe... Bitch Your Like A Sick Animal "Your Meetin With A Vet".. << Dat's nice You had tight personals too, which is what Ketch lackked in his spit. Ketch 22, no personals, but a lot of witty wordplay and punches... I can't really say dat your verse fell off at all in any parts... Les do this, I move quick, ain’t waitin ta hurt you… Rascal ya only Good Quality cuz Patient’s (patience) a Virtue… Get Ya Lines Straight, you just a Rook wit this Chess… & like Tricked Hurse that means I’m Hookin Up Death… I’m knockin, ya stocks droppin, I’m rippin up ya shares, & After that, like Alphalpha, I’ll start Stickin Up Ya Heirs!! (hairs) Beatin me’d be a Lucky Shot, so start Shovin Clovers in Techs… Member of the Mile High Club…I’m simply Fukin Over Ya Head… Shit, all good lines wid punches da whole way thru. Some more personals would have been nice, and woulda made your verse a lot better doe. I did notice dat Alphapha line which was aiight, but nothin like Rascals personals at you... Judging by which verse was most consistent all da way thru Ima have to give this ish to Ketch. Rascal, your shit was nice dawg, but I jus felt as if it was a lot less complex, and fell off in parts, which also made a few lines seemed forced. Close battle to judge doe. Congrats to whoever wins... VOTE=KETCH |
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iight basically this was a pretty weak battle...........
ive seen some of ketches shyt and i think he came reaslly weak in this battle..... punches: rascal flow:ketch personals:tie(rascal had mroe but i think ketches were better) creativity:ketch close 1 but this goes 2 ketch........... |
Ketch22 had the vocab down, good lyricism, good flow in general. Best line, "Get Ya Lines Straight, you just a Rook wit this Chess…& like Tricked Hurse that means I’m Hookin Up Death"
Rascal took it though for both metaphors and personal. It was all close, but the personals are what put Rascal over the top. v/Rascal |
CLose battle but
rascal-Came pretty nice....seem like you know what your doing so no really need for me to tell what to improve on...Nice spit Ketch-Aight spit also..Came realyl close...But Fell off a lil...Rascal takes this becuz of his punches...Both have the structure v/ Rascal Return the favor please...He d/rin me and I murked him http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128356 |
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