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^^I told you I wrote it in half an hour. We'll battle some other time, only 20 min. to spit. Aight? But later...
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Lethal Kahn Fuckin Whack ass Played Rhymez dumby
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I'll smack you wit a backhand...
That crack your back like chiropractors after lookin at your catscan... In between freestyles I've become a masked man like Batman... ^^ One problem, CATSCANS are for the BRAIN... a yo dis kids too sick his shit slick like mayo.. haze is harrassin lethal he shood b in jail like wit yayo... dis dude is wack as hell dis will b a ez KO... im sick on keyboard man i hack nerdz... fo me itz ok n but fo u its ok backwardz... ^^^ The structure looks strange, but it flows well enough...up complexity in metas/wordplay and punches I know ur tremblin from fear, wonderin what I can do please, for God's sake!... ...a fuckin cow has a higher IQ than U! Leave u bruised, stop ur blood flowin through ur veins Battlin u on a message board?... ...didn't know I was playin board games!* Damn bitch, you don't lack wackness at all! actin' like a man but... ...umm do u even have a pair of balls?! ^^ More weird structure...flow is de decent...some funny lines...but they lack complexity...up wordplay Vote: Black for being slightly more complex and having slightly harder hitting punches 1 |
I'll smack you wit a backhand... That crack your back like chiropractors after lookin at your catscan... In between freestyles I've become a masked man like Batman... God forbid, i cut dis dude up like fried squid... Misguided, n unproviided call me da ko kid... Nigga i aint gonn lose 5-0 like sinista did... Dis prick sux dickz on chix fo porno flix... im bout to b banned from RB fo bein too sick... im chop u up to pieces n pick ya up wit chopsticks... if u came out a doggs ass u still woodn't b shit... metafours is metafives, dey on anotha level... im big stonez n boulders dis dude is fruity pebblez... im from da east but i drop dimes in da south... im prime in da house,im bigtime n u small like a mouse... n u cood ask lethal its hard to talk wit a nine in yo mouth... if derre was a ref fo dis battle he'd b like time the fuk out.. a yo dis kids too sick his shit slick like mayo.. haze is harrassin lethal he shood b in jail like wit yayo... dis dude is wack as hell dis will b a ez KO... im sick on keyboard man i hack nerdz... fo me itz ok n but fo u its ok backwardz... some nice shit.....i dont even think i need to post the other verse this was a merk.... i give this shit a 7.5/10 your punches hit harder....had some personals metas were aight overall flow was better.. I know ur tremblin from fear, wonderin what I can do please, for God's sake!... ...a fuckin cow has a higher IQ than U! Leave u bruised, stop ur blood flowin through ur veins Battlin u on a message board?... ...didn't know I was playin board games!* Damn bitch, you don't lack wackness at all! actin' like a man but... ...umm do u even have a pair of balls?! Sorry ass batman, shit I'm a whole fuckin army u get clowned so much... ...people mistake u for a birthday party!** Warmin up, im fuckin ready to "hoe him" ur the reason why... ...we're gona open the "Elevation" forum! Before I'm done, I'll give u some advice friend dont get confused... ...and take this as a beginning, to your end! 6/10 you had some nice punches but black hit harder vote-black haze |
oh yeah and drop an honest one on this......
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=128588 |
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No wonder you quit from the Original RB, coz you keep losing. Check your sig if you don't know what I mean, dumbass. |
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Yo that wasn't a bad battle. But cha boi black haze took tha cake. He had better structure and vocab. And on top of all of that his flowz was ill.
Vote - Black Haze |
Black Haze Bit His first few lines, so thats automatic points off. the rest was ok, dont know were it was written or not but It good enough to beat his apponent. It also helped alot that he explained his last punch. though I belive he could've done a lot better becouse I've seen his shit befor.
Lethal Kahn was ok but he was stumblin over his words. His verse was too hard to read and I took about 2 min just to try to figuer out why he Bolds his words when they dont ryme wit each other or anything like that. His Birthday party line was weak and needed improvement. V/ Black Haze P.S. Quit biting shit, one day it'll end up doing the same back. U good enough to beat some one wit Ur original rymes, Just try harder son. |
Cannibus wrote the first part of black haze's verse, look it for Ur selves.
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