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uppin wow this is gettin slept on...........................
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UPPIN you bitches...don't sleep on this so much,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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up................................................ ......
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damn ketch jpoll was right u didnt have any real punches.ur verse needs a lota work it sounded like notebook to me no persoanls really and no hard punches flow and structure could use a lota work too but no hate jus keep elevatin.jpoll i liked the thing bout the ring good one and nice punches and personals. good strucuture it was complex but easy to read. flow could use a lil work but good verse solid punches.
v/jpoll return the favor no hate hit up these battles http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130036 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130033 |
JPoll-yo punches were hard, descent and they landed..yo structure confused
me a little..yo personals was good 'n' shit...but mostly yo punches took it... kEtCh~22-yo punches were hard but not as hard as JPoll's...yo structure was good 'n' shit..yo punches could've been a little harder & you would've tookin' this battle... Vote- JPoll |
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