yo uppin dis shit. UPPIN..........................

ayo stop sleepin on dis shit people... still uppin for votes!!

Etc. your rhyme reeks of NewBism. I'm not hatin though cuz that is what my first rhyme was like...I got KO'd. You will probably elevate pretty quickly thoug cuz I can tell you have potential. The verse, though, was weak in that the punches weren't strong, the rhymes werent creative, and the rhyme structure was basic. That's what you are going to be judged on ya feel, so keep up.

Big P...I say pick on someone your own size, but this is all you. Return the favor!!!

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129235

still uppin dis shit.... dont sleep now people, thanks to those who voted

still uppin dis shit, 1 more vote is needed so keep em commin

dam you both suck ass word

ok this was wwack and the only attempt at a fuckin real punch came form big thats it and there was only one in this whole fucking battle and if its a battle you gotta throw punches if you dont you suck period.

v/ big only real punch