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xXVeNoMXx 06-17-04 01:50 AM

eyedentity your signature says it all :Thugs love us, Gangsters Approved

thugs love fuckin ya in tha ass and gangstas aprove hittin yo loose asshole

ride or die bitch dont fuck wit us

[(REAL+POLITIK)] 06-17-04 01:57 AM

ya Damn Right sonnie, bus yo head to the fuccen white meat.



ROD Lyrical Artillery

Young Smirf 06-17-04 02:00 AM

Yeah that's right u pussy ass nigga you need to watch your fuckin' mouf you fuckin' bitch ass nigga you think u talkin' shit will make me mad well fuck you cuz you ain't even none of my fuckin' time until you show me that you is then you need to shut the fuck up cuz everything that you write is wack you fuckin' bitch ass nigga.

R.O.D.4lyf you faggot.

andu09 06-17-04 02:18 AM

Oh Mah Bad Young My Lil Bro Has Been On The Computer And He Said He Was Readin Stuff . For Real Eye. Yo Punk Ass Goin Get Crushed If Ya Fuck With Us Cause Bitch Dont Fuck Around Cause We'll Dominate U Motha Fucka

Tempa 06-17-04 02:24 AM

Yo young smurf yo shit was horrible. Phantom urs was iight tho. U had some good punch lines and yo shit actually rhymed. Most of Young Smurf's verses didn't rhyme at all. I can't vot cuz i don't have enough post but if i could it would definately go to Phantom.

andu09 06-17-04 02:30 AM

Man Foo Youngs Shit Did Ryhme I Think Thats Why Is Is Winnin The Poll So .. Learn Some Shit Aight

andu09 06-17-04 02:47 AM

Peace Out Everybody In Rod Goin To Bed
Peace

Wordz AhGod 06-17-04 03:17 AM

ya'll be some hatin ass niggaz. U know U dick ridin when U attackin someone whose right, I explained my shit, plus I was'nt alone. Its nice that Ur winnin and all, but hay, I stated my shit...No need to get Ur flunkies on my dick now. calm down. and am I suppost to be scare of THIS nigga, Aundo09? I read some of Ur shit nigga, U aint barely been rappin for even a portion of the time that Iv been splittin heads. In the streets, Id woop U and Ur best friend Mr. Nickel in a battle.

Wordz AhGod 06-17-04 03:19 AM

come on Politics, U was on bET right, wat happend? diddy droped Ur no good ass?

[(REAL+POLITIK)] 06-17-04 10:29 AM

HA HA HA, i Laugh in the face of IGNORANCE
If u want to battle me, u can get Slaughtered like the rest on Rotten.com

Nah Bitch i'm in Studio NOW as we speak.

KOOL COL-B 06-17-04 01:53 PM

young smirf won this shit. fuck u eyedenty, werd

R.O.D. BEEYOTCH!!!!

DeaDly RhymeZ 01 06-17-04 01:57 PM

Y'all bitch ass R.O.D Faggots Stop FreePosting [(Real+Politik)] Wtf Are u doing wit dem and ur Not da Leader Ur Basicly Better than all of them nigga what is wronge well yall niggaz need to StOp FrEePoSting
You kno im gonna battle all of yall see what ma Record Turnz out ta BE iight prolly 15-4
so lets get it STartin wit who eva form ya Crew Comez On First

Wordz AhGod 06-18-04 11:40 PM

yo deadly, calm down dawg. I'll take half and U take half man. we all need to add wins to our records. Iv been gettin warned by niggaz who role in groups of 10. U some oversocial ass bitches. I challange like 3 of ya'll and all U do is send threts by like U gonna send a fuckin virus at me or some shit. If U dont wanna battle nobody, get the fuck out the site. If so, The slaghter house is open from 9 am to 8 am ever day for the rest of Ur life. Holla at me. Im done freeposting, this my last one.

Dissonance 06-22-04 03:12 AM

Can I use the same explanation? ^^^^

Basically Smirf, You structure was painful to read (not the basis of my vote because if i were to take the time to copy, paste, and hit return, it would probably be a lot easier, but I'm not going to do that now am I? So very bad structure)
Flow was choppy more than it should have been and there weren't any extremely special plays or punches to save it. You tried a few multi's in there, but they could use some cleaning up.

Phantom: Nothing special from you, but every line had either a punch/play, meta/sim, or was setting up for something in the next line. Flowed allright, a little chop, but not as bad as Smirf's. Short lined structure kept it fresh for reading and helped your flow from getting too off. Good rhymes and I liked the punches..

Vote = Phantom

Dissonance 06-22-04 03:15 AM

My bad...the reference was to Eyedentdy's really long explanation on page 1. it summed it all up really well. Not hatin on ya Smirf, ya doin ya own thing...just liked phantom's verse better is all.


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