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I felt flow, angle, interest ad imagery all went to Rated. He also had nice emotion and I just enjoyed his concise piece. VA dont use that font or colour it make it diffucult to read. Your topic was decent but it bored me a lot. Erm......

i liked this line from Rated...

"Carvin Ingrimes of The lost People that left a single tragic heart"

I think...idk..lol

Rated-Your verse was mad hott..no lie...i liked how you explained ur time of events...in order,that was mad hot.....i liked ur worpldya and sturc was mad good on this i think this was ur hottest topical ive heard in a while man nice stuff....ya need to get...dang idk wat to say ur was mad hott.....Overall..Nice.....

:.va.:.....Nice verse also ur verse was dope too...i liked ur wordplay...and ya struc i think killed you on this....it was kinda confusin..wit the 20 months earleir something like that...it was nice tho....NO MULTIES!...lol im not a newb i know ...but ya wordplay was good...ya stay on the topcial well to

Winner ithink of...staying on topic more is...Rated....nice stuff man...but of ya was hot shit

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VA
your strucutre was meessed up makiing ur verse hard to read..
your lines were way to stretched and that ruined your whole..flow
you had good emotion..but terrible strucutre and flow
overall 6/10

rated..
your emotion was great.. itm was better than va's .. you
had good strucutre making your verse really easier to
read..and everything..you won becuz you had better flow
strucutre emotion and a good storyline:
my vote rated

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Aight Check It..

Va: 4/10
Your Emotion Wasnt Realy Felt...Your Flow Was Off...and That Structure Was Wack. This Better Of Been Your First Topical Cause It Wasn't Good. Just Elevate.

Rated: 6.5/10
Good Drop..Flow A Lil Touchy...But Your Emotion Was Pretty Nice Threwout. Your Structure Was Decent...Nice Usuage Of Words. Keep Dropping Ill ISh.

Vote - Rated

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