Originally Posted by flash

Yo yous the "rated x when dangerous" "topical king"...

^Only time you rated x is when you stick it in the ass of sting...
this line wasnt good...why wud she stik it in Stings ass of all people. I dont rate this lineone a bit.

Your avy looks like you a bumblebee that jus got nutted on...
You think your one of the vets of this site but you just a con...
basic and not hard

I aint got time for this shit right now...so i lay it down weak...
I'll leave you weak and Bloody from your head to your oblique...
u sorta had mulits.

Could have just left it at those weak ass six bars but fuck it...
Your gunna wish you has thrown this challenge in the bucket...
basic.

Dont know why you made it 10 lines i said 6-12 cause that all i need...
Tired of these fucking newbs wanna battle bout ta make yall bleed...
basic

i would seriously give that verse 2/10 There was no complex punches if any real hard hitting punches. No wordplay or any humour this was a very poor verse. No personals either. Your flow was fine but I mean you can flow all you like but its battle, where the decent punches.

Originally Posted by Rated

AIght check it
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From Original RB and you still smooth and sweat like sweet tea
Look if I had a Light bulb it can Light up beside you brain and you still wouldnt have an idea of beatin me
attempt at complexity. nice try. . . . . poor outcome

Am Sorry Poor fellow I dont roll that way im not into other Single handed guys
Still Feelin sorry for ya self ever since Your poetry Strength[/url] Didnt get no replies
personal :thumbup:
maybe giv u 3/10