This was my first time chekin' a topical battle. It was tight. I read both rimes thoroughly, and Femcee kept a consistent flow. I liked the structure. Your dialogue between the devil and angel was tight! Everything was working. Since this was a battle of styles, I would have to say that Femcee had the better vocab and wordplay. There were no punches in this one, just storytelling. Femcee was able to captivate my imagination...the imagery in your rime was on point.

B.X.P: I wasn't feeling you at all. Nice story though, but it didn't have a consistent flow, and it wasn't interesting. Take it back to the lab. Elevate!!

Vote: Femcee!!

yo, both of those were hot, I really enjoyed this battle... it took a lot of creativity... but there really was no contest we all kno whos was best, but both were hot

winner..... femcee

thanx every one, uPPin 4 one Last VoTe

Femcee: Had a real good story goin. I got picture everything in my head. Yo verse was strong i was really feelin it. You had vocab. and yo structure was on point.

Bxp: Yo verse was straight too but it didn't come off as good as Femcee's did. She set tha bar and it just was outta ya reach. You should step up ya vocab and structure. Good job to both of ya.

Return tha favor. LOL.
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