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-   -   Mental Anew Vs. Liquor Of Tears (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=130023)

Restricted 06-21-04 02:37 AM

No..Crew Votes Are Only Allowed When Two Peeps In The Same Crew Are Battling...

Vote Will Be Deleted..

~R~

Crossword 06-21-04 11:29 AM

well Flow is in my crwe too... so Mental has no votes.... Damn people pay attention

MoTiF 06-21-04 03:07 PM

remove meta's 2.

L.I. 06-21-04 09:37 PM

Mental - nice nice drop....tight flow on this....vocab was very good....very deep verse with a creative storyline....not a heads on storyline but a complex storyline which is a bit tough to do....but u pulled of the complexity....so good job....only flaw in ur verse was the lines that didnt rhyme....sorta messed up the read....but i could look around that and definantly like your verse....it gets a 9.6/10....

LOT - nice drop also...first off u had good imagery...good vocab but mental's was better....flow was choppy in spots...but for the most part it was decent....stayed on topic...but mental jsut ousted you wit the vocab and flow....give it a 8.8/10...

Vote - Mental

EDIT: ahh just saw all that shit bout crew votes...lot's in my crew....oh well it was honest....u ccan delete it....just wanted to leave feedback at least....

Crossword 06-21-04 11:13 PM

^ also in my crew... cant vote god damn people... someone else NOT in our crews vote...

FlowIntelligent. 06-22-04 09:57 PM

actualy i was in your crew after i voted :D lol u can delete it if u want but i joined after i voted

MoTiF 06-22-04 11:34 PM

It stays then...:)

Its actually 2-1 :)

SPuLâ„¢ 06-24-04 01:53 AM

aiight, times up. Liquor won. Yea, woo-hoo the 2nd round is beginnin'. :cool:

[.:D:.] 06-24-04 10:28 PM

Liquor Of Tears-You was a lil bit imaginery and you had a few good Vocab and I liked it how you worded it and stuff and its mainly on topic...Structure was decent and stayed focused

Mental Anew-You came close and your vocab killed it but You was close with LoT but mainly he had like a slight better you then telling it

V/Liquor of Tears

MoTiF 06-24-04 10:36 PM

Lol these are votes i talk about he has no clue what hes talkin bout.

Metaskriptz 06-24-04 10:39 PM

Closed Lot wins because the thread close date is up


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