LOL this was good right here I was rollin when i read this:

if dis battle was a test then nigga ima ace dis//
and put da chrome 2 ya grill jus like braces//
dis nigga thinkin he hard cause he rude//
ill kill u swallow ya spirit and really eat soulfood//(get it)

I think Spitz had the better structure, but Blimp's flow was nice. He came harder with the punches, and was consistent about it thru his verse. This was one of his better verses that i have seen.

Spitz, you had a nice flow and good structure, but you need to come a lil harder next time. Your rhymes were a lil basic, and blimp was just more creative than you with the metas.

v/Blimp

Kill, ya flow was there, but your punches weren't.. Might also consider workin' on ya structure, your bars seem a bit on the short side.. Keep workin' at it dawg.. it comes with time..

Blimp, you know you took this, I don't even really have to explain.. All out had a better verse.. Much respect to both cats though..

v/Blimp

one~


Also, could I get a vote or 2? Links in the sig.. thanks folks..

def i give this to blimp
the first verse just wasnt cutting it