rated: hott verse but your lines are stretched gotta work on that just make them shorter...other than that ya verse ya hott...LMAO@wizard of oz line lol good shyt nice punches and good flow everything was consistent except for the structure good W/P... another hot line was the microphone on head line that was nice...good verse

overall: 8/10

YAR: your verse was good but the first thing i noticed was it wasnt complex at all it was pretty simple and that isnt good...and your last 4 lines are really played....cell phone...roam lines and your last line about resending...played not too many good punches consistent flow and structure and good W/P and multies...no meta's tho that were good except for the lawnmower blade one....

overall : 6.5/10

vote: rated

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Rated got this, for tha fact, my boi had alot hotter verses, better punchlines, and had some humor, but one dude was rite up there, u stretched ya lines a lil bit. Gotta work on that. I will vote for you on tha poll if u vote in one of my battles in my sig, then pm me and tell me u voted. Peace.