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06-27-04 11:35 AM |
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Originally Posted by Tweeza
Whew....Where to start?
Both of ya'll need to elevate, seriously. Punchlines are weak. Work on your structures.
Pimp:
You need to learn how to rhyme and work on your structure.
Overall: 3/10
Big Bad Wolf:
Your verses were okay, not the greatest i've seen from you, you can do better than that.
Overall:6/10
Vote: BBW
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^^^im goin' to have to agree on that cuz Pimp you need to fix your structure was line the shit up don't type it like u typin a paragraph 'n' shit...BBW..yo verses was ok..yo punches could have been a little bit harder..& yo structure was aight...keep elevating..my vote goes to BiG BaD WoLF...{peace}
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Manyall need a lesson fo reel man Elevate fa reel this was jus horrendous
My v/ bbd |
