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DeLeon 06-21-04 04:59 PM

O shit forgot to rate LE's verse....since it wasnt all that good a 6.5/10

Pop Lotty 06-21-04 05:47 PM

THIS BATTLE WAS SOME SERIOUS "EHHH" MATERIAL

OPENER:LE..JUS BECAUSE OF THE FACT THAT IT WAS A BATTLE LINE
CLOSER:TIE...WERE THOSE SUPPOSED TO BE PUNCHES? IDK
PUNCHES:RED....HE HAD SOME DECENT ONES, WHILE LIMITED WERE TYPE WACK
FLOW:LE...ALL HIS LINES WENT TOGETHER, ALL HIT AT THE RIGHT PARTS
PERSONALS:TIE FOR NONE....LE, IT SUX WHEN UR LINK DOESNT WORK...LOL
VOTE:REDDOT, I JUS THINK HE CAME HARDER WIT THE PUNCHES, I DIDNT SEE NONE THAT I LIKED AT ALL FROM LE...SO HE GETS THE VOTE..
DONT BE HERBS PLZ HIT THIS UP......
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...6960post1356960

For$akeN 06-21-04 09:15 PM

REDDOT'S DROP:

alright L.E your the leader of a wack crew ill intentionz
while im dropping hot shit getting honorable mentionz
WEAK SELF GLORIFICATION NOT NEED 5.5/10
you think you hot while your just candian bacon
you call yourself a topical head but you just fakin
keying up typing your verse but your hands is shakin
NOT A GOOD PUNCH NOT FEELING 5/10
you so nervous u know red dot is droppin a hot freestyle
while you molestin ten year old boys you pedophile
WOW DO YOU HAVE PROOF IF NOT....NO PERSONAL 6/10
little bitch your touching boys in their private parts
saying "i will give you candy" like sweet tarts....
WEAK WEAK WEAK 5/10
alright you didnt know reddot would rip ya.. right?
fuck yourself you got a dick and a pussy... *hermaphrodite
DECENT BEST PUNCH YET 7/10
alright so im gonna end this battle saying you a sick fuck
soo next time you wanna battle let me wish you good luck
WEAK CLOSER TO FINISH 5.5/10

OVERALL: 5.6/10///56%

LE'S DROP:

All's you can see...is tha 'red dot' aimed at ya heart
Murder 1st degree...a breath of ma skill blows yours apart
GOOD OPENER 7/10
Steppin' up to tha best...You gon' be 9-3...haven' u heard?
You can't beat 'better'...and the better wasonly an herb
THAT WAS AIGHT NOTHING SPECIAL THO 6.5/10
Why did I decide before...to let you back in tha dopest crew?
Why do you try? Against tha 'Master'...wat can 'Hopeless' do?
WEAK ARE YOU EVEN TRYING??????6/10
You claim that your a 'newbie rapper'...isn't that amusin'...
You so wack...I'd rather battle a cockroach that's producin'
OKAY PUNCH NOT THE GREATEST 6.5/10
Learn to take shit seriously...your destined to be in a circus...
Take tips from these battles...
...but then you still could not be able to merk shit...
AIGHT NOT A GOOD CLOSER BUT IT'LL DO FINE 6/10

OVERALL:7/10///70%

VOTE GOES TO: Limited Edition

L.E 06-22-04 12:18 AM

A'ight uppin this inactive fuckin' shit...one more dawgz come on close it...

L.E 06-23-04 08:13 PM

Fuck.............uppin' to close this inactive shit...............

L.E 06-24-04 11:36 AM

Come on people...one more fuckin vote to close this shit.....................uppin'........

DeLeon 06-26-04 12:07 AM

uppin this for yall....dont got anything better to do...ha ha

Ca'lam 06-26-04 01:27 PM

to me this was an easy win for limited... his verse flowed much better, and it seemed like redot put vocab where it really didnt fit.. that hermaph line fucked ur sylable count pretty bad lol... when you say that shit out line it sounded pretty bad.. you need to work on vocab and your flow.. just cause you use the words dont mean they helped your verse at all, you gotta use ie correctly along wit flow... good job both of you, but limited looked like he went a lil easy on this.. any easier you woulda lost :P...


v/Limited

Ca'lam 06-26-04 01:28 PM

how do you become a registered voter ?? <--- would like to know.. aight get at me

Know-Gimix 06-27-04 02:23 AM

Vote - Limited Edition....

I felt your verse flowed better, and had much better punches--- example

You claim that your a 'newbie rapper'...isn't that amusin'...
You so wack...I'd rather battle a cockroach that's producin'
basic... but effective and funny--- Good luck to the both of you in the future... ez

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131305


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