uppin....

got an ass woopin won...wHY? well yall came good in this battle and punches pretty much ties up...but got had more personals, and better ultimately leading him to the win.... nyce job both of you

^^^but u didnt poll....................

Marv- not the best drop by you....maybe your just shakin off that rust
you had an ok drop...you had punches abd personals and your overall flow was good

overall:7.0/10


Gotta- you had punches.......you had lines that hurt your rhyme like this one
nice drop, punches was hot, some hit hard at home/
and this one
can talk however i want, cuz arrogance is bliss/

those arent punches and that hurt your verse....you did have some punches
and personals...overall an ok drop

overall:6.5/10

Vote-MARVOLoUsJ1009

okay good honest vote dogg...keep it fukkin comin ya'll pause...

Uppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnn...stop Sleepin Muthafukkaz And Vote

up....wtf niggas need to poll they vote.....cmoin

easily marv

opener-marv good personal kind of a self glorfication but better then gottas it was ight but didnt really like it

closer- neither really but marv got it again actually had a punch gotta should of left that shit off didnt like that either

personals- both had em but i liked marvs better that shit played odd his name and of his old av was pretty creative an tight

structure-dont count so tie

overall seemed 1 sided to me on this shit the creativitie an punchs marv had took my vote on this battle an gotta that shit in his sig isnt givin props to resticted hes talkin shit to him so that dint make since really had a bunch of filler in this verse to me

vote marv

up.

up.

up. will return favors..................................

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^vote ppl.......drop ya links and all

This nigga kept me laughin thru out the entire verse, Marv was good but I gotta hand this one to gottaasswhoopin4u. this niggas punches were redulouse, they had me rollin. Marv had good punches too but his lines was stretched. Gotta had on bar that did'nt ryme but I was to bizzy laughin to care. he did suprisingly good in this. I didn'nt expect it from some one wit his record but it was actually a tight battle.

Flow, G
Struct, G
Punches, G
Metaphore, M

V/Gottaasswhoopin4u

^^^^^?......aneway uppipn if niggaz vote 4 u in ya battles dont come ova here doi dat shit

funny battle and i ain't sleep! lol
 

this whole thing was tight:
JEa!!..look dickhead u aint fukkin with da punches & words dat i bring-
dont 4get "solo" killed u so dis gon be second time u got merk by a "king"-

sombody get dis trash put in a crew,its only men dat dis fag's lookin da crew-
dogg u was about da get jump & left ya lil bro & he took da "asswhoopin4u"-

u need a roll with ya fagget bar's,u think ya flow would embarrass marv??-
dis nigga ass is trash he's "on top of punches" cuzz he's "ova his avatar"-
(look)

dogg u need da quit tryin be tuff when u pussy i suggest u stop hero-
how many wins u got? u like da "online service" cuzz on da "net" u got "zero"-
(netzero..get it)

after i drop dez few bar's just post up ya lame text and leave-
u fukkin borin while u sendin "threats" dogg "jay" is catchin "z('s)-
(jay-z...threats his song and da z meanin his bar's is puttin me da sleep..u'll get da punch)

^i got all ya jokes and ya had nice punches Marv.. i like the personal wit' king solo lol...
and it was nice flow to it in my opinion... oh yeah and nice structure not too long very reasonable...

gotta ass whoopin:
dog u shouldve ducked this battle, a loss is somethin u cant afford/
u call yaself the sickes on the site, but give shoutouts to niggas that dont even kno u on the board/(he made a reference to restricted in that rhyme in his sig)
there alot of irony in his rhyme, cant u see/
how the fuck he gonna be king, when hes a bitch in queens/
^ i undastood ya jokes they were funny but ya punches coulda been harder and ya structure be havin' spontaneous changes makin' it hard to follow up... and the two lines over was minor but that can piss sum1 off if they wanted to keep flowin'... respect the rules, nigga... don't stretch 'em and you had an hour to drop...

*Both did good drops but... uhhmmm

**overall vote: marvolous got this fa sho...**

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