eye and spul great battle really good.

eye-
1)your first verse opened up weak.consider hard punching persoanls in the first line it works good then do another hard one in the second line. u prolly werent on edge cause u didnt feel good.flow and structure werent bad. a little stretched in some places and some words didnt rhyme but the syllables fit.

2)okay your second verse came a lot harder. especially your first opener thats good thats how its done i liked that it had me laughin. next line was good too u did exactly the opposite of what you did on your first verse. punches in this battle were very good but in the first one they were very weak. the only thing that stayed constant was strucutre and flow but sometimes that would be stretched out. the only thing i know to improve on is to space out your lines to give the punches more of an effect.

not bad but i gota be honest spul came harder

SPUL-
1)first drop was good prolly cause u were heated and had somethin to write for cause he already dropped his. opener was nice consitent hard hitting punches. your strucutre was good flow was good and some good persoanls thrown in there it was good. verse was medium not ur best of drops.

2)this is where you got heated up.great punches personals and everything. didnt worry about strucuture or rhyming as much cause it came naturally i think cause u were more heated up. excellent drop.

v/SPUL

return the favor drop a vote on this battle
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130756

This is bull shit, U niggaz is fucked up, he does one punchline that was'nt even an actuall punchline and U go nuttz. how the fuck is
Don't come here talkin' this shit, when you're record is awful, 0-3
Your verses are so messed up, why you called "eye", becuase you obviously can't see
and actual punchline, its the stupidest EyeDentdy personal that niggaz have done to me. U niggaz is on some bullshit just cuz if our records. I lost a few battles, move on. Theres no possible way that Im getting sweeped just cuz he lives on this site.

no his verse was much more clear and raw and fresh only words i can find to describe it nobody is dickriding so dont start wit that stuff neither and its not cause of ur records ur verse was jus not as good in our opinions

i mean.. its not all about punches man.. his wordplay was better.. his structure was good.. flow was there.. i mean, its just his style that is beating urs.. not exactly always the content in the verse... my vote wasent dickriding at all cause i dont give two shits about a "vet" or a "noob"... i look at the verses and style, and delivery.. if you cleaned up ur verse and had better structure u might have won on those two verses.. thats providing spuls verses were the same..

sry for freeposting again, but i just re-read ur verse again eye, and it was good, but what i dont get is how you set up a punch so tight, and let it down... i mean your setups are pretty good:
then crack Ur chest cavitity on the floor while ur ribs tide to the bumper of my 4 door Hunda Accord/
Draging U off the floor while scoping the ambulances back door wit a 4' 4'/
^ annoying gangster theme, 4'4'?... second line wa garbage, first line was good.. its small shit liek that ... aight im done freeposting

yea, man, I guess you can't tell what a punch is, cuz I had a lot. And I really didn't try either. man, you wanna see me try, look at my finals verse.
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...ewpost&t=130616
And yes, that "Eye" line IS a punch. Cuz I said your verse is so messed up in structure that you must be blind to have thought it was good.

honestly both were really good.
flow: both
style: both
Punches: eye was better aimed
personals: eye
opener: spul
closer: spul
complexity: eye
vote: eye

Iv seen ur finals verse, it aint all that mind blowing, U just basically cut and paste the entire day away like a kindergardener. most of Ur shit was U following R and picking up dirt on him and using links to boaring ass shit. I aint hating, Im just a fan of lyrical niggaz, like Cannibus, Big pun, and Chino XL. niggaz who would rather say the best metaphores in the world than give a fuck wat U'll think about Structure. This aint a mu fucking building block, if it sounds good, sick or not, Im a stand by my shit and say it. plus Ur lines are too basic, I didnt see any "word Play", I want some one to define that shit. I just had to let that out my chest befor I stabed somebody from frustration. continue wit Ur voting and freepostings.

wasup wit that vote by aka arent u 2 friends and isnt he sposed to explain a vote??? i always saw u 2 as friends so y he not explain the vote like we all did?

flow spul
structure spul
vocab eyedenty
punches spul by far lol
ok spul u had good flow structure punches u could work a lil on vocab personals
eyedenty work on structure flow and personals