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Poppa Kap 06-24-04 08:26 PM

haha im a ladies man even on the internet...this is what my pist me off about DeLeon, kid posessed skill, no need to bite. But ah well..thanks for feedback

Poppa Kap 06-25-04 03:49 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Apotheosis

A Man and His Words.

Deadly Vision
Scattered and broken dreams, it matters not tho it seems..
Writers block is just a prism of battered unfocused beams..

The Great Harold

A 1000 screwed up papers, clogging up my bin,
Because my attempts at brainstorms, are nothing but mere wind.

Anticipating the moment, of golden lecture that I write,
Ruined my Monday afternoon so much, it’s now Wednesday night.

Its beyond now a fight, it’s a point I need to prove,
That I can take poetry in motion, and actually make it move.


DeLeon
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"You guys are ill"-is what u shud be saying.

Quote:
Originally Posted by sexkitten
that was hot Harold keep it comin'!


Quote:
Originally Posted by $Ridicule$
without a doubt you are the best poet on this site no doubt in my mine or ne1 elses i should think

and im serious i really mean this you should really keep that shit commin



this is u u lite up the poet comeption*


Quote:
Originally Posted by RapMisstress
I was feeling Harold, the whole piece was tight though. I liked it no doubt.

Poppa Kap 06-25-04 03:51 AM

I shudda changed that brainstorm lines to...

as my attempts...rather than because.

~AyBee~ 06-25-04 05:25 AM

Insane!
Quote:
a cancerous form has takin storm on my head like the war on terrorism
I like this line alot, I'm sure alot of people can relate. Keep up the good work!

VERDICT 06-25-04 06:03 AM

yeah i liked dat line i liked da whole thing pc

Key... 06-25-04 03:31 PM

Fosho thnx


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