If Nervez would have stopped trying to fill space wit his first lines in every bar, he wouldv gotten my vote. He said shit just cuz they sounded dangerouse and didn go too far. I dont look at structure but I guess his was Ok. his punches werent to good till he hit that Oprah shit. but It still did'nt hit his apponent, he just started a glorification thing. all in all, most of his verse was ok, just needs work.
BigChase gets my vote only becouse his opponent droped it. His flow was ok and so wer his punches. Too me it was anoyying that he put those lil stars at the end of his rymes just to explain his lyrics. If we have doubts about Ur verse, we'll usually ask. thats the greatness of metaphores and punchlines. Ur line punchess wer kinda basic, so we dont realy need the explanations but ok.
all in all, I like Ur verse, U stook to the point and aimed at Ur apponent for real. Keep it thug, and practice kid.

V/BigChase

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sure but i cant post tomorrow im leavin for the north to go to the funneral
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you saidd u was goin to pos wut happend i did a quik verse n u took days to post u should b dq ......you had time to work on it wasup with these votes......
my evidence is above you said u were goin 2 post n was a hoe show.............

no i did it freestyle u complainin bitch......lol ur mad cuz i merked u man.......i was gone from monday to friday and got back the day I posted soooo dont hate cuz im better u had time to do yours As soon as I got bck i saw how dumb you are startin shit when i said ill back back on thrusday to friday!!!!! ask lil scrappy even god! plus LOOK AT THE OTHER NERVEZ BATTLE WHERE UR NAME'S WRONG I SAID ILL BE GONE TIL THURSDAY OR LATA SO CHILL........

20-04, 04:53 PM
BigChase
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Re: battle

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sure but i cant post tomorrow im leavin for the north to go to the funneral
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u should hve posted it that day n e wayz i wanna a rematch.my grandfather died 2 weeks ago and i aint askin fo no sympathy votes.........................dis battle has laggd 4 a min............................................... .........

Nervez - Had a good opener and some decent punches. Structurew was good to but some of ya rhymes was strugglin to rhyme.

Big Chase - You were lyrically better than Nervez but your structure was as good.

Vote - Big Chase