Yea, i agree somewhat. Horus did rhyme, if they were verbalized in a song it was sound great, and the stucture was a little off, but it wasn't kaos, enough to get his point across.

It really came down to his punches like cookie said, Horus had better lines.

i vote for him

Dang, take it easy.. Shesh, you guys are all serious, it's about fun! Uppin for votes still! Please be honest!

Return the favor!

Tweeza Vs. Dissonance
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130763

Tweeza Vs. Double Cross
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130254

lol, I know I already told you that I liked your complexity by your "play" with words. So obviously it wasn't "too complex", just want to point out though, that there were only two complex bars in that whole spit:

you battled the wrong creature, tell me, what's the purpose/
coz your lyrics are very healthy, mines are sicker that Magic Irvin/
or Irvin Magic, whatever you preffer, you fag-got/
(I just don't get it...given I don't know who the hell Magic Irvin is, so maybe flipping his name meant something and it all tied in with "wrong creature" hell if i know...very complicated...possibly another level I won't ever achieve...ah well)

and


so fasho, we could see saw/
i went first, gave you a plate and now you have something to feed off/
(I definately got it...but it actually was complicated. I understood the "see saw" and "feed off" didn't catch the "see saw" and 'lifting him up' though...but technically the lifting him up part wasn't at all part of the play, since you never said anything about elevating him...the see-saw/feed off was good though.)

Other than those two punches...everything was extremely basic. Good rhymes, not too bad of a flow, but here:

or Irvin Magic, whatever you preffer, you fag-got/
my rhyme will amaze and shock you like a surge of static/
(shock you like a surge of static huh? no hate...just not a good punch)

man, this is the precise reason that i clown dudes/
yea, i know, i'm harsh and you might say i'm a hater/
but man, you exhale stank rhymes that fuck up our Ozone layer/
(nothing in there was a play and "exhale...fuck up our Ozone layer" was just aight)

just thought I'd elaborate on your "Too complex for ya'll" comments...I'm pretty sure most of these monkeys can get your spit...two bars out of a whole verse shouldn't be enough to lose you a battle

HORUS got his one...his punches were harder than his & they connected...tha flow was good also tha structure was a little bit betta than Tweeza's...Tweeza....man...yo punches was good but not as hard as HORUS's....keep elevatin'...my vote goes to HORUS becuz his punches were just plain harder man.....peace...

yea, i'm trying to work on my punches and my flow.

but as far as me saying i'm sicker than Irvin Magic, you don't know Who Irvin Magic Johnson is?
he's a famous Basketball Player who caught HIV like a decade ago....

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lol..yeah I figured on the whole basketball player thing (I don't got a tv to watch sports and i'm usually playin em instead so I don't even try to keep up...all I care is that the Lakers didn't win...)

...i still don't understand the "like magic Irvin/ or Irvin Magic, whichever you prefer you fag-got/"

Was that a play/punch or just flippin the words for flow...i can see doin it for flow, but i'm so lost if that was a play.
Good luck on tha battle both of ya...(i'll up this for you) VOTE PEOPLE!

It was obviously for Flow, i noticed that when I first read it, it flowed nice.

bumpin up fa votes..

Vote.. The truth he ripped this up with punches.. flow was decent aswell.. othere dude was aight but not as good pz.