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future got this no doubt...other boi u gotta elevate alot aight future got this wit better flow structure punches and i liked his verse overall v/bk to tha future Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
aight, uppin need valid votes
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Vote/bk 2 tha future
verble violence had an aight flow but i think that bk had better punches but the otha dude did aight to ~one Xplicit |
a yo re-explain your vote so it aint DQ'ed and poll that shit
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can we uppin them fucking votes please fuck...............
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yall muthafukas see this battle dont you than vote please got damn for tha last time already shit.............~one~
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akright can yall fucking vote on this shit already so it can be closed got fucking damn just vote leave ya link and i willv ote on ur shit if u drop a proper vote`one~
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vote on this muthafucka shit, yall need ta hurry up so i can dget this win shit
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structure:verbal violence (both need work)
flow:verbal punches:verbal(other guy had to many played ones) i felt that verbal won, simply because the future talked about MJ's nose... if you used a played concept, you need to be clever with it or dont use it.. that is what lose him the battle, becuase he didnt really rhyme his words to well.. and is structure wasnt exactly up to par.. but it was a nice try.. stick with it.. both verses need to elevate a lil bit.. v/verbal |
return the favor...
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132624 |
can we uppin the votes yall please drop a link i will return tha favor~one~
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yo czn we uppin for mo votes yall leave a link i will return the favor
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ok well I say this was not a ill battle at all...........................................
structure was fucked with both of ya'll, vv had really short lines.......... and bk had stretched ass fucking lines............................................. punches go to vv because man future had played lines about Dr.J & MJ creativity/originality go to vv cuz guess what????? future had played obvious lines using plastic surgery and MJ in the same bar is not uncommon... vocab: both was lacking but I say bk 2 tha future had it...... flow: easy none...one drop was stretched and the other was short...... therefore vv takes this with the punches category. |
uppin fo mo votes on this drop a link i will return tha favor
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damn good battle
bitch tha only time you verbally ''violent'' is when you steal ryhmez\\
kidnap verses and turn em into your own gay linez\\ give me a "thrilla" bitch please, im a hazard to hummanity like a viral disease\\ this bitch is cuttin n pastin like he is Micheal Jackson's plastic surgeon\\ was a fuckin sick openin, not tryin to hate verbal but if this kat didnt bit that shit, that right there is why i chose him... VV ive battled you how many times i know your shit's better then that kinda had a weak spit no effense i just know you got better shit to pull outa ya sleves return the favor on my shit too since i voted honestly on this... |
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