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Ambitionz 06-27-04 09:57 PM

Upin for votes....................................

Influential 06-27-04 10:00 PM

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...d.php?p=1370280

please hit up my battle.............. thanks

ThisGirlSpitFire 06-28-04 08:51 PM

aight lets get some more votes in here and end this battle

dj lightweight 06-29-04 11:27 PM

yeh the girl ripped ill post so she can get my vote!

ThisGirlSpitFire 07-05-04 02:14 AM

dam we need some more votes in here aight....lets get this ova wit please...im tired of lookin at this

KillaCamFlow 07-05-04 02:26 AM

Urm...alright battle..i lied this girl on this battle for some reason..i liked her creativite....her standing up for ..the female's that spit the fire...iight girll...iight...ya need to still work on some wordplay more...and more complex.......and use some more personals...iight for ambit...ya need to elevate man come on man let do this shit right...iight lol...nah u trieds but u need to work on really making it look like you really tried to do this battle..iight elevat both on personals...punches and wordplay iight !let go!

Votetg

ThisGirlSpitFire 07-06-04 02:49 PM

lets get some more votes in here....fa real and end this battle aight

G-Suz 07-08-04 09:17 PM

girl is good..... ya got tah flow girl... dude was good too... i think

pk 07-12-04 12:51 PM

Thisgirl u made Ambitionz look like a bitch i like dat u got my vote

Ambitionzu the bich in this battle
:shoot: R.I.P bitch

schema 07-12-04 11:10 PM

you can dq my vote if you want but i dont think anybody got what you were talking about in some places and thats on you if it doesnt make sense not the voters

Spoke a rhyme of water, and ya dyin to float
Wrote shes a girl...but ya afraida dickrydin votes?
->>i dont like the first line at all but the second is pretty nice

Neva make it big, im here to expose the hoar in ya sig
And when I sed 'wacks in you' the bitCh started to dig
->>wack

Defense low, and wack is stress, and each word spokens tense
Shiet only 'shellz' you throw come at the end of ya sentence
->>dont get the second line at all

Face-it, aint gonna fake-it, fuck ya jus str8 up dont fit
how u gon rap when ya look like an octopus takin a hit
->>i get the hit thing but still terrible second line

Claim to fame, but ya wack as before still didnt change
Only thing you did right...was oxy-moronin ya name
->>kinda decent closer

I flow like a pro tho still i stay sexier than yo girl
How i spit better rhymes than you...and yet its a mans world?
->>nothing extroardinary but i could bob my head to it

You coming at me nigga you didnt bring ya A game
cuz ive heard every femcee joke and been called everyname
->>same as first 2

But again ill explain cuz its not gettin to ya brain
check me out this girl spits fire and throws flames
->>filler

The votes are not in so this battle is up for grabs
This pussy prolly seen and rode more dicks than i have
->>decent punchline

Woah I know that aint ya only rhymes cuz ive got plenty
You get no pussy thats why ya lotion bottle stay empty
->>pretty good got a chuckle from me

Im simply...the best... lyrical shots to ya chest will put u to rest
Exterminatin these pest one by one with no weapon
->>filler

You need some help but sorry theres is none for your condition
I thought you was comin harder than that...change ya name nigga you have no ambition
->>stretch but alright closer

v-ThisGirlSpitFire

vote on mine: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134617

ThisGirlSpitFire 07-14-04 01:29 AM

aight anyway lets get some more votes in here we only need to more votes and its ova....aight good lookin out aight

ThisGirlSpitFire 07-15-04 12:52 PM

lets end this battle fa real...it only takes a couple more votes and i know more than this number of people that have posted have looked at the battle so please just vote and get this battle closed

~Lady Fiya~ 07-15-04 02:14 PM

aight it obvious the thisgirlspitfire took this hands down... i liked the wordplay from ambition... but overall t.g.s.f. had a betta flow and punches...
the closing:
You need some help but sorry theres is none for your condition
I thought you was comin harder than that...change ya name nigga you have no ambition

that was funny, girl... just get a lil' more complex and your str8.
My vote: This Girl Spit Fire...

i don't have any links... lol sry
~wun~

$-YoUnG-ThUg-$ 07-16-04 07:18 AM

needless ta say this girl got skill, n she tottally merked this ambitionz cat and thats y she got my vote cos in every aspect of the battle she merked ambitionz

v - girl


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