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Blaq-Ink 06-27-04 10:14 PM

uppin for votez some fair shit tho i think these nigga be hatein....lol......any way it dont matter i aint mad...so letz get some votez up in here
~1~

Yung Tek 06-27-04 11:46 PM

uppin ..uppin ..uppin ..uppin.. uppin.. upin.. uppin... uppin !!!!!votes votes votes votes votes votes

Blaq-Ink 06-28-04 08:42 AM

votes..............
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Blaq-Ink 06-28-04 11:53 PM

votes..............
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favor will be returned
:cussing: vote

Tycoon 06-29-04 01:07 AM

aight both were dry for something that should flow but black ink had funnier punches and personals

Tycoon 06-29-04 01:08 AM

return tha favor

Blaq-Ink 06-29-04 07:58 AM

uppin 4 votes its tied up now 2-2
............................................uppin for some votes............................................

Envee 06-29-04 01:39 PM

Ink - aaah not bad.... you could have done better on this battle it was a close battle but i think both of ya need a lil work on how u set up ur punches...

Tekk - Nice shit but still not tha best that i've read u could have done better on this battle... Nice closer...

Overall Thoughts - Tekk and Ink could improve their punches by buildin they structure more like

Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah HIT-YA// << Set up for tha punch!
Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah SHIP-YA// << Add a lot of multies a lot of wordplay 2...

And Ink woulda won this battle but he stretched his bars way 2 much and his structure sucked he had some good word play...

Tekk u need some work on word play and punches...

Weak battles guys real weak...

Vote: Tekk

Envee 06-29-04 01:42 PM

Return tha favor guys i judged fair i think u should do tha same...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132257

Blaq-Ink 07-01-04 09:56 AM

uppin 4 votez............................................. ......................................

Blaq-Ink 07-02-04 09:55 AM

uppin for some votes..............votes..............votes

Miss. Lyricist 07-02-04 02:32 PM

Both of you sucked, plain and simple.

Y'all need to work on your flow. Both of you need to make sure your syllables match in your bar. The flow is ruptured when one line has more syllables that the line it's supposed to rhyme with.

Both of you need to work on your personals. The punches were weak and you had me yawning. Blaq, I see potential in your spit, just work on the flow and your vocab.

vote/Blaq

Please vote on my battle vs. Hoops, if you have 100+ posts

Blaq-Ink 07-02-04 09:46 PM

i dont 100+pionts...sorry
uppin for votes........

Blaq-Ink 07-03-04 11:34 PM

uppin for som votez niggaz......................
i'll return a fair vote on one of ya battles

Blaq-Ink 07-04-04 02:47 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Blaq-Ink
uppin for som votez niggaz......................
i'll return a fair vote on one of ya battles
:cussing:


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