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Envee 06-29-04 08:19 PM

Lmao //\\

This shit is funny mad people b dyckridin this cat i didnt say everyone did im juss sayin mad people did...

This is some bullshit dawg..

Bump...

Archeologist 06-29-04 09:23 PM

This is how I rated this: -
opener: Illunatic
personals: illunatic
punches: Illunatic
wordplay: illunatic
flow: Illunatic
structure: illunatic
So.. Illunatic won..
pz

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Envee 06-30-04 12:38 PM

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'Uppin' 'Uppin' 'Uppin'

Please keep tha votes fair

And no dickridin votes

shadow 06-30-04 01:02 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Envee
Yo yo,

Peep

I called this kid out and he wouldnt drop unless i came 1st....
He like a dogg his flow is "Limp" witout "Buiskits" but he aint no Fred Durst...

Im bout 2 add this "Head" to my signuter labeled "Ripped In Passion"...
Call this battle math cause my rhymes "Whole Numbers" urs are "Fractions"....

Call this kid a "Ghost" but dont trip u aint close "2 pac" missin like ya profile....
Illunatic to this "Hole" battle is like a pre teen pregnate bitch stickin wit denial..

Imma have u "Runnin" and ill get a KO over u cause Envee is "Disrespectin Ya Lines"....
Call Envee, 2pac kid cause i can only handle bitches like you "One Day At A Time".....

This kid juss got "Easy Baked" juss like mac and cheese in a microwave...
Sorry ya aint ill ur rhymes need work like ya girls hairy cooch needs a shave....

lmao i dunno dawg quik key up... U rushed me and told me 2 do it 2day so u wont forget.. aight go!



thats a really newbish structure it needs to be fixed as soon as possible becuz you wont win many battles like that..ur flow was good and ur punches were nice sepite ur structure..i think u won this battle easily in my oppinion...but both verses were bad... really lame bttle fo'sho overall *5*

shadow 06-30-04 01:05 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by ILLunatic
Aight go ahead and contest the best, but I wouldn't suggest
I've read your shit before, and i'll tell you I am not impressed
I'll tell you this you stand correct, from the words of ya sig.
Explained it good, ya did! You're just a "Motherfucking Kid"
Accepting to battle me is like asking for yourself to lose ya teeth
I'll slap you with a mic....
....wrap the cord around a throat, and watch you gasp to breath
3 Months since I last battled, you aint shit to come back too
You been gone too, i'll make you returning debut. "Envee's back"...."who?"
You're wack dude, I wont bother to check this battle, your that screwed
Infact dude, i'll give you props..........
......................I wont be that rude. Fuck it, let this battle conclude


Fuck it.. i haven't done text in 3-4 months... that was a keystyle



ur structure was better than his.. but only by a lil.... your rhymes scheme honestly sucked big balls......... ur verse was just all around bad...i was feelin it... ur punches wernt hitting hard.. quite honestly i didnt think u had one personal in this verse thats why envee wins overall 4/10
my vote envee

-NERVEZ- 06-30-04 04:28 PM

illunatic won this better flo all around....envee u did good but yo flows were to extended...........both had decent punches,,,ill had a better structure n rhyme scheme

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Envee 06-30-04 08:48 PM

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Uppin This Shit!!!!!!!!

Please Explain Ur Votes!

J. Luth 06-30-04 10:03 PM

in my opinion evnee won this it was a very close battle illuntic had nice punches and everything but i felt that evnee won this by her punches their was just somethin bout her verse i liked but overall yall was tha same in everything except punches witch evnee got and illunatic got tha structure evnee u need to work on that fa real overall vote goes to evnee now please return tha favor i forgot to get tha link but tha name of the battle is me vs rapmaster please vote

[.:D:.] 06-30-04 10:58 PM

ill- ya shit was ok. I think ya punches hit harder then envees. ya structure was kinda crazy though. Not much vocab but still i think ya won. Not much personals either.

Envee- ya spit was ok too. But ya verse was too simple. Ya punches were ok. structure was aight too. ya had more personals. But work on ya vocab. If you had some vocab you could have won this battle.

ILLunatic 07-01-04 01:36 AM

Damn.. how many votes have been put into this batttle?

Envee 07-01-04 03:22 AM

Lmao //\\

Vote Fair Peeps....

Explain Vote

Vote On Tha Poll!!!!

ILLunatic 07-01-04 05:49 PM

Damn kid! You've upp'd this 7 times already. Isn't the limit 5

shYtown 07-01-04 05:54 PM

i say envee won, they both did goo but envee had some real good punchlines

East Miles 07-01-04 05:58 PM

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132754

Vote the weak mafucka on my thread because He think I prewrite so fuck it I wanna let him have it so please vote and give him a pussy win....

Ayo I'll hit ya'll with a honest vote if you do this...=( :cussing:

Tempa 07-01-04 06:03 PM

Envee - Good verse. Had some good punches in there. Structure was straight. Ya closer wasn't really a closer but ya do what ya gotta do. 6.5/10.

ILLunatic - Good verse also. I liked yours better cuz you kept it more street. You wasn't all like I'll murder you bla bla bla. But ya shit was real and gutta. Liked it. 7/10.

Vote - ILLunatic


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