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uppin..end thisbattle plz lol

UPPIN.. plz close this battle, i got other battle i wanna get in ^_^

hmmm yeah... ok... well infareds verse didnt rhyme, had no structure or flow, a tiny bit of wordplay, and hardly any punches...

hoops.. some alright punches, solid flow, decent wordplay and nice structure/...

so my v/ hoops... infareds really gotta elevate

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uppin for the win guys.. let close this plz.. leave links

uppin for the last vote... end this battle plz..and leave link

Infared you need to put some structure in your verse. You need to break it down in lines, bars or something. It makes it harder to read, and actually pick out the rhymes the way you did it. You didnt use any personals against him, I dunno if you even used any punches, cause i had a hard time finding anything other than a giant run on sentance.

Hoops, I aint gotta say much, you had nice multis, nice flow and overall structure wasnt that bad. You lyrically murdered him, KO.