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scriptive won but both of you need to elevate keep it up though

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They were weak but its ok, cuz they new at this. Hustler had some creative stuff but none of them were punchlines. U should aim at Ur opponent, I get tired of stressing this to U kids. In a war, niggaz who battle aim to fuck anybody in the other side up. thats wat it is. try this concept Hustler, it really works.
scriptive had some ok shit but his lines were stretched and alot of filler. not as much a hustlers but almost. Use better punches nextime, Ur vocab was better than ur opponent.

Punches, S
Structure, H
Flow, H
Metaphores, None
Vocab, S
Opener, H
Closer, S
Overall verse, S

V/ Scriptive
P.s. Hustler, U did good and I liked wat U wrote untill the last part, U had writers block. next time diss the nigga on the other end of the battle to Ur best ability. keep ur flow and structure, u was ok on that. keep elivating. and vote on one of my battles in my sig. learn wat not to write from the niggaz I either K.O. or injure and leave lyrically scared. peaz

uppin lets get this over with

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ya i agree both were rlly weak but i say scriptive


v/scriptive