yo stae dawg u foin it big u got this battle by a bunch punches structure and everything any other could say and if any one else knew it to u won...
other doo i wasnt feelin ya verse dawg not bad but state has more talent than you and he had better punches....
v/state

I was feeling State more than Canopy..

when I first read it, I thought that canopy took it, becasue his verse was tight too..
but whn state came he came..

Punches: State
Flow: State
Structure: both i guess

I vote for state capitol...

NOW, return tha favor n vote in my battle.....

I forgot the link cuz... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133042

Ok this battle was fire but I got to give it to state capitol because his flow was crazy and he was mad creative with the bulls line and the piston line and witht he magic johnson line i mean his punches were harder so vote goes to state capitol

Ups to both of you.

State capitol came straight out and was on point. Had a good opener, and he used very good metas while he was throwing punches. All the while he flow was on point, and his structure almost remained ok. Personals were right on point in his flow as well. Didnt really see any multis though.

Canopy you opened up good, I liked the line about him getting action. After that you didnt really throw many punches, and you had a few lines in there that didnt rhyme, like your closer...which made you battle close weak. Try to use some more metas so that you can come up with more creative stuff. Your flow was a lil off also, throw in some multis and that should help it out some. Not too bad of a verse though, elevate a lil bit and youll be on point.

v/State Capitol